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Post by [xoxo] shard. :) on Sept 6, 2008 9:03:26 GMT -5
Ticked. That's all I can explain it as, because I don't like to swear, even on the internet. Just audition for deputy, and if you think you're going to be inactive, stay away. This curse of the deputies thing is the last thing I need on top of life.
Normal bio form. Quality not quantity. That doesn't mean have two sentences for each section. Best roleplayer wins. Go.
Sorry Sound. [/blockquote]
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Post by &&R.A.V.E.N :3 on Sept 6, 2008 9:47:45 GMT -5
I hope you don't mind a character that's already in use.fadedmemory silverkit, silverpaw, fadedpaw, fadedmemory thirty-seven moons she-cat cloudclan warrior/deputy
looks&&
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Post by Spice..xx on Sept 6, 2008 13:40:12 GMT -5
Raven I know you aren't finished, but that bio is excellent =D good luck!
Shardeh i hope you find a good deputy this time =( *huggles*
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Post by &&R.A.V.E.N :3 on Sept 6, 2008 18:53:24 GMT -5
Thanks Spice! It's one of my really old bios that I have saved on word pad xDD
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Post by all out JINX ♥ on Sept 7, 2008 0:57:17 GMT -5
.Rainwhisper. This fire rising through my being, Burning I'm not used to seeing you .Name.
Rainwhisper .Gender.
female .Age.
43 moons .Clan.
CloudClan .Rank
Deputy .Looks.
Rainwhisper has amazing feature's. Her paws are a midnight black with long silver claws, her average sized paws are attached to long slender midnight black legs. Her flank is slender but muscular with a scar from the middle of her back to the middle of her flank and a cluster of scars at the center of the back of her neck reaching to the left and making their way some down her chest. Her pelt is an amazing midnight black mixed with a silver-black at the top, all the fur on her body is semi-long, where her ribs, shoulder blades, and corners have darker flecks of silver-black. Her tail is long silver-black and elegant, one of her favorite features on her body, her whole tail has black with silver tips on every hair. Her head is in a beautiful shape, like any other cats head she has a round triangle with one extra rounded edge to it. She has 2 other round triangles that are an average size, the right one midnight black and the left a silver-black. Her nose is deep black, her whiskers are silver-white, and her sharp teeth are ivory-silver. Her face is an elegant midnight black with silver on the bridge of the nose going up to the enter of her beautiful irises and down to her black nose, a scar crosses the middle of her nose starting from the bottom of her left iris to the starting of the right cheek. Her final and favorite feature is her irises, they are a misty silver without any pupils. Once her hypnotizing pupilless silver irises hit the moonlight then sparkle like the stars and once they hit sunlight their like the moon in brod daylight. .Personality.
Rainwhisper is a very dreamy and controlled female. She is very serious when it comes to her clan, even though she likes to joke around she can turn from laughing to straight-faced and serious in a heart-beat. She is a social-loving cat and can be the most sliest cat in her clan, she has amazing stealth for her fur color she looks like a small pool on the ground at night and a shadow in the day. She sometimes has dreams of her dead clan-mates and past battles that she had never heard of, but mostly of those who have died. When something serious is happening in her clan then she puts on her straight-face and starts to take order, her voice is beautiful and smooth and when she shouts orders it's heard clearly and beautifully. In battle she is fierce and full of pride, she is full of speed and strength but mostly full of natural born skills. Her battle skills are more amazing then her gorgeous eyes, especially her long silver claws that can rake a feline from a distance with her long legs. She serves only her clan and leader and will do anything to bring them out of justice, her loyalties lay only with her clan and nothing else. She can be a fun-loving female that knows how to drive males wild but she knows when she's going to far. She loves to moon-bath and stay up to run with the light of the moon, she serves her clan with dignity and brings justice upon those who disobey the code of all warriors. Her life belongs to her leader, her clan, and her family, she protects and serves them with the soul her grandmother tainted. .History.
Rainwhisper's grandmother started a big deal with the family, she had 2 mates both were untold of until one time. Her first was a tom in her own clan, not really paying attention to the other clans except hers. She flirted a lot with the tom and made sure her own sister, who also liked him but was shy, didn't go near him. Orchidglass had been a small she-cat but she was all muscle, the tom had been her crush and number one priority since she was Orchidpaw and he was Solarpaw. After she won him over she started to pay attention to the clans around her, getting bored with her own clan. Once she started to she found a liking to a couple other toms, only being able to get to one. After a couple moons of spending time with both toms she became pregnant with 3 kits and not knowing which tom they belong to. After telling Solareclipse that she was pregnant he acted excited and went on doing his own business, later that day she found out her sister was pregnant also. That night Orchidglass went to tell Lunarbird about her news, but only to find out the Serenityclan'ner wasn't interseted in her anymore. A couple moons later she gave birth early because of news that her sister finally told her, Hummingbirdkiss finally told her that Solareclipse was her mate also. After giving birth to Blizzardkit, Flowerkit, and Ebonykit, Orchidglass ran away into Serenityclan territory once Solareclipse tried to speak to her. He chased her all the way to the camp and the cliff of the ravine, Lunarbird had been by the cliff also and chasing after Orchidglass alongside Solareclipse. They had to stop when they saw her staring down into the lake below the ravine, before she had jumped she whispered to them. And while she dropped from the cliff the 2 toms could hear her say their names as closely as if she was right there. After Blizzardpaw was named an apprentice she to fell for a tom, like her mother had at that exact age but this time her sister didn't like this tom. While the 2 were hunting together both confessed love at the same time and mated that night, when Blizzardpaw became Blizzardkick and Larchpaw Larchjackal Blizzardkick was do for her pregnancy. She gave birth to 5 kits, Rainkit, Glacierkit, Horsekit, Rabbitkit, and Forgottenkit. Both Rainkit and Glacierkit had pupiless irises but one had silver irises and one had yellow. Rainkit was always saying she could hear someone saying her name in a cold dead voice so close to her ear that she got chills, Blizzardkick wouldn't believe her. When Rainpaw became an apprentice she was given to Dreadwhisker as a mentor. She trained hard and quickly, never loosing pace and never loosing concentration, her goals were almost always met and her mentor was almost always pleased. When she was doing a training secession with Dreadwhisker, a pack of rogues invaded their clearing in the forest. Dreadwhisker was killed and Rainpaw was given scratches along her neck, after a group showed up and drove the rogues away Rainpaw was made Rainwhisper. A couple moons after that she was given Grasspaw as an apprentice, she taught him every move Dreadwhisker had taught her. When they went hunting together, Grasspaw wanted to catch a fish, it was close to his warrior ceremony and he wanted to prove himself one last time. Before she could save him, Grasspaw fell in and drown, after she brought him in Stormstar made him a warrior before he made his way to Starclan. Rainwhisper grieved with Grassdrift's family that night, she left early so the family could grieve alone. When she was in the forest by Serenityclan territory she could hear her name being whispered and saw her grandmother, Orchidglass attacked her only to disappear because of the shadows drifting away from the darkened spot. Rainwhisper came back with a gash on her side, but was treated and healed to a scar. She didn't go to the great battle when the clans faced the tribe, she decided to stay with the clan and protect them. When her leader came back to report that Nightfur, their loyal deputy, was nowhere to be found, Stormstar appointed Scissorteeth as deputy of Cloudclan who disappeared a little after. Rainwhisper was appointed deputy after the lost amber male went missing.[/blockquote] .In Character.'Orchidglass! Don't do this! Don't jump because you were hurt!' The small dappled fae could hear them behind her, she could feel their fear and she could feel them paralyzed. Her large dark brown irises were tearless and her face expressionless, Orchidglass turned to the 2 males with anger pouring out of her like a broken heater that you couldn't turn off. The anger in her dark brown orbs flashed as they turned to the male with a golden pelt and pupiless blue irises 'I will do as I wish! And I will never love you again! I will never follow you again!' Her whisper poured out of her with a cold dead voice that made both males orbs go wide. Orchidglass turned her anger filled orbs toward the black and silver tom with violet irises and wide black pupils 'I never want to see your uncaring eyes again! You broke my heart first and now you will never meet what could have been your children! I hate you and Solareclipse both, Lunarbird! It was your fault first!' Orchidglass' whisper rang out like a scream slicing the night sky but it only felt like a dead whisper filled with ice, she turned her head back toward the lake. She quickly got to her paws and stepped off the edge, turning her head back to the males with a tear in her large dark brown orbs, she fell silently with the sparkling teardrop following more slowly. After the sickening sound of a large slash and crack, Lunarbird felt a cold presence 'Lunarbird' chills ran down his spine as his skin shuddered with horror. At the same time Solareclipse felt the same cold presence 'Solareclipse' he also had chills running down his spine, except he jumped in shock and horror. They both looked at eachother in disbelief before reality caught up with Solareclipse and he took off in a full sprint not wanting to stop. It took Lunarbird a little longer before he broke down in grief before a patrol found him and took the broken soul back to camp to explain to the leader. .Relationships & Kinmother- Blizzardkick father- Larchjackal[dceased] brothers- Glacierfur, Horsetail sisters- Rabbitfoot, Forgottenmemory nephew- Mimicpaw niece- Unbearablepaw aunt- Flowerfrost uncle- Ebonymind grandfather- Solareclipse[deceased], Lunarbird, Grebeflight grandmother- Orchidglass[deceased], Hummingbirdkiss, Heavenwings former mentor- Dreadwhisker[deceased] former apprentice- Grassdrift[deceased] .Other.none .CodeWords.PaintingPortraitsOfGhosts
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Post by SHADE. :D on Sept 7, 2008 6:01:21 GMT -5
Raver, I thought Fadedmemory is having kits...?
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Post by &&R.A.V.E.N :3 on Sept 7, 2008 14:41:34 GMT -5
No worries, Shadness. I got a comprimise. She's not gonna have them for a REALLY long time, and when she does, another queen'll take them.
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Post by SHADE. :D on Sept 8, 2008 9:39:44 GMT -5
BUt I thought you wanted them born soon? .___.
*is severely confused*
I thought that was why you and Firington jumped at the chance of getting a CC litter space.
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Post by &&R.A.V.E.N :3 on Sept 8, 2008 14:10:52 GMT -5
I was waiting for someone to adopt the last kit.... And then they were going to be born... But this came up, and Faded seems like the perfect cat for deputy that I can think of.... I can take her down if you want.... D=
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Post by SHADE. :D on Sept 9, 2008 9:44:07 GMT -5
No, you don't have to take her down.
But if she wins the deputy spot, could I give the CC space to someone else? I won't take the kits down, but because they'll be delayed...?
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Post by &&R.A.V.E.N :3 on Sept 9, 2008 16:58:18 GMT -5
Of course, Shader ^^ Whatever you please.
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Post by [xoxo] shard. :) on Sept 9, 2008 19:16:31 GMT -5
Okay, if anyone else plans to audition, it should be soon. The deadline is September 15th. So post before then! Hopefully I'll be able to get on that day. [/blockquote]
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Post by Dansen[Mouse] on Sept 11, 2008 6:57:08 GMT -5
I deleted my audition because at the moment I've got to much to do and I don't think trying out for Deputy would be a wise choice for me right now.
Besides, I'm happy to have Medicine cat apprentice[even though I don't get a super cool colored name for it]
Good Luck to everyone else!
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Post by [xoxo] shard. :) on Sept 14, 2008 12:49:46 GMT -5
Okay, and the winner is...
Raven with Fadedmemory.
I understand that she is absent currently being grounded.
Sorry, Rogue. Maybe you can try out for EC Deputy? [/blockquote]
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Post by SHADE. :D on Sept 15, 2008 9:33:50 GMT -5
Congratulations, Raver. ^^ Could you take her kits down, please?
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Post by &&R.A.V.E.N :3 on Sept 15, 2008 15:07:38 GMT -5
Wow...... 0.0
Just....wow. Alright, I won't fail you Shardeh! -salutes-
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Post by x.Jolly.x on Sept 15, 2008 17:20:29 GMT -5
Congrats, Raven! ^^ You deserve to be deputy!
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Post by the CORB.inator on Sept 15, 2008 17:58:05 GMT -5
Congrats Raven! Fadedmemory is a cool name :]
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Post by all out JINX ♥ on Sept 15, 2008 20:39:26 GMT -5
-sigh- there goes another audition..... lets just hope that I can do better with my auddie for EC deputy ^^;;
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Post by (aurora) of the problematique on Sept 16, 2008 22:13:22 GMT -5
Rogue, you're active enough and you've improved loads since you first joined. You're a nice choice for deputy.
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Post by SHADE. :D on Sept 17, 2008 9:40:54 GMT -5
I completely agree. ^^ Your time will come, Rogue. <3
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Post by [xoxo] shard. :) on Sept 17, 2008 14:33:16 GMT -5
Yes, Rogue. I believe that you are very likely to win the EC audition. It was very very hard for me to decide. ^^ [/blockquote]
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