My Sweet [Escape]

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Brackenpaw was panting hard after fleeing from camp. There were too many cats around for her taste, and she hated the feeling of being crowded. Ever since her parents left her, she was always keeping to herself, isolating herself from the other apprentices and warriors, she found talking to a kit easier then talking to someone her own age.

She sat under a tree and licked her chest a few times trying to get the silver striped fur to flatten down, though because it was long it was harder to do so. She looked around the dark forest, knowing that she wasn't supposed to be out with out a warrior, but at the moment, she didn't care as she started to breath in the scents around her.

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A grey and black striped femme slipped around every bush, in no hurry to catch up to her target. The silver female swiftly and gracefully moved around every dried leaf, her intense ice-blue optics flashed with light. Her long silver tail just above the ground, her silver maw scenting the air for her target. The grey and black striped femme caught a fresh scent of the fluffy silver apprentice, Brackenpaw. Glacierstripe crouched behind a bush noticing Brackenpaw's maw slightly open for scenting air. The silver femme would be inpressed with the apprentice if she scented her. Glacierstripe sunk in Brackenpaw's expression, the silver apprentice looked relieved that she was away from the crowd. Same as me... she moved her silver tail along a leaf of the bush to get Brackenpaw's attention.

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'Let's see... trees... bird but stale... faint scent of a patrol...' The list in her head went on as she sorted out the different scents that she drew in from the forest. Suddenly she tasted the fresh scent of an EclipseClan Warrior and a heartbeat later she heard the rusling of leaves. Her ears flattened as she spun around to face the the bush, curious to know if it was a kit or an apprentice that followed her from camp, or maybe just a hunting party that was out to catch fresh-kill for the camp.

"Who's there?" She mewed, nervous to know why someone would be stalking her. She half feared it would be a Tribe cat coming to kill anyone who was left. The silver fae then shook her head to get the thought out of her mind. The Clans were battling the Tribe and they would win. She had no clue that the Clans had been forced to retreat back to CloudClan.

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_{//lol Mousey it's Brightclan not Cloudclan ;D}

//Glacierstripe stood as she pushed through the bush noticing it had strange berries on it. Her icy blue optics flashed with satisfaction as Brackenpaw scented her but a little annoyed that the femme didn't know which cat it was. Her short silver fur with black and different types of grey's slashed all along her pelt prickled with dissapproval when she saw that the silver apprentice's expression read as curious and nervous. "Good job Brackenpaw, you scented me. Next time try to identify the cat thats there and try to figure out if it's a group or only one cat" Glacierstripe couldn't control her voice from sounding like a dictaitor but she tried to make it as soft as possible so it didn't sound like she was scowlding, it did anyways. The grey and black striped femme sat down and wrapped her tail around her average sized snowy white paws. "Scrawltale would be impressed..... do you have anyone in the battle beside's your mentor and my cousin?" Her ice blue optics flashed as she saw her brother torn up and bleeding, it was the tribes fault. She thought of her sister Scarletpetal and hoped to the bottom of her heart that she was okey. She also remembered her other family, Spicetalon, Razortomb, Corbynfeather and her hero her aunt Amethyststar. She hoped all of them were okey, please come home alive.....

_{//guess whats crazy..... all my EC cats, which are 3, I either adopted or was given....}

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Ooc:// XP Crap, did it again! All three? XD Thats funny. I adopted Brakenpaw.

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The over large, silver apprentice respectfully bowed her head towards the Warrior, embarrassed that she had been caught outside the camp with out a Warrior, and even more embarrassed that she didn't identify Glacierstripe in the bush. Any other apprentice probably would have sooner. "Y-yes, Glacierstripe. I'll try next time, I promise."

She looked down at her own paws, kicking herself for being like that. 'Glacierstripe must think I'm a fool.' She thought to herself. 'How am I supposed to become a Warrior if I can't even identify my own kind!' She looked up at Glacierstripe as she continued speaking, but she then looked back down. "No, I don't have any family." She almost mumbled to herself as the flashes of her past came back to her. Her mother leaving the Clan, her brother drowning in front of her, and her father hating her so much he left the Clan to try and track down her mother. Aside from Scrawltale, she was completely and utterly alone in the Clan, isolating herself from everyone.

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Glacierstripe looked at the silver apprentice forgetting that her family disappeared before her. She remembered her parents dying, both Ebonysky and Jinxdancer died bravely but Brackenpaw's mother and father ran out on her. She searched Brackenpaw's expression as it changed, all she saw now was embarressment. "No need to be embarressed little one, you will make a fine warrior since Scrawltale is your mentor. If you don't mind would you like to practice your battle training? If you do well then I can tell my cousin of how well you're doing." Surprisingly without trying Glacierstripe's hard voice softened just enough to let Brackenpaw know that she was serious. She has been through a lot be nice, thoughts that she has never had before swarmed in the silver female's head. "Don't worry Brackenpaw, Scrawltale will come back. With the rest of my family, they will all come back" Glacierstripe hoped she was right, she didn't want any of her family gone even though she didn't take the time to know them all equaly.

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Brakenpaw's eyes lite up when Glacierstripe mentioned battle training. She always loved the thought of learning something new and when battling with a warrior, you always learned something new. "Some battle training would be good for me." She replied, trying to push away her shyness as she looked up. It was just her and Glacierstripe, not a whole crowd of cats, and that was just the perfect number for her.

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Glacierstripe smiled with satisfaction, battle training was her specialty and her favorite when it came to helping new mentors with new tricks. The silver femme's intense ice-blue optics flashed with pleasure, lets see what this apprentice knows and lets see what I can teach her. "Okey, since I've done this for awhile and it's only you and me I will teach you some of my best tricks. But thats only if I think your up to it, you'll have to show me what you have so far" Glacierstripe was surprised with herself, she has never talked to an apprentice this much let alone talked at all to anyone. The grey and black striped fem stood in her battle ready position which made her look dazzling. "Pretend I'm a rogue with the same scent as you, since your the only one out here you'll have to fight off me yourself. Attack me before I can attack you, and please don't take forever" Glacierstripe loved talking about battles and wished with all her might that she was at the battle against the tribe, why did I have to be anti-social at the time and not want to be around other cats?

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Ooc:// This is my first time roleplaying a training session with an apprentice, so bare with me ^^;

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"Right." Brackenpaw answered as she took a quick second to think of what she was going to do. She made the mistake of giving out where she was going to attack almost every time she trained with Scrawltale. 'Not this time.' She thought to herself. She looked at the left side of Glacierstripe and tried to make it look like she was going to attack there, then ran towards her and at the last second she changed direction and aimed a blow at Glacierstripes right side with sheathed paws.

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Glacierstripe looked deeply into the apprentice's eyes, only to find nervousness and a lie. She found out soon what that lie was. The silver femme braced herself for attack from any side but found it obvious that Brackenpaw wasn't going for her left side. As the silver apprentice's paw striked out, Glacierstripe was prepared as always, no matter how good the warrior was she was always prepared for some sort of blow. She could feel the tip of Brackenpaw's paw at her side before she quickly turned to the silver apprentice and rammed into her, just enough to knock her down. Glacierstripe stood there without panting with ice-blue irises shining with a brillaint icy glow "Try not to make it look so obvious next time that your not really going to attack me from the right. Hide it in your stare and your body before attacking, also attack with some speed" The femme backed away and stood there looking uterily nastey, she looked like a rogue wanting to fight for the death. "Attack me again and do as I said before" With her gorgeous ice-blue orbs flashing with seriousness, the silver femme arched her back and let out a hiss that would scare a fox.

_{//don't worry I haven't either....... only showed around borders and territory once but thats it}

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Ooc:// Ok, thats cool ^^ I'm having trouble coming up with moves for her to use so I'm looking in the 'Secrets of the Clans Field Guide' book XD

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Brackenpaw wasn't ready for Glacierstripe's counterattack as she was rammed backwards, head over paws in a big sliver striped blur. She took in what Glacierstripe told her, then went on the move again as she ran towards the gray and black striped Warrior, not even stopping to think. She hoped that this time she would at least land a blow on Glacierstripe as she spun around, putting all her weight on her front paws, leaving her hind paws free enough for her to lash out and try a back kick on Glacierstripe.

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Glacierstripe watched as Brackenpaw launched her large self at her, she wasn't completely prepared for the silver apprentice to attack so quickly right after the first. The silver femme stepped back a couple steps not judging if Brackenpaw's back kick would hit her or not. For the first time in a long time Glacierstripe was knocked off her snowy white paws by an apprentice she was helping. Her ice-blue irises stretched wide with shock, she was speechless for a long time. Finally she composed herself enough to stand up "That was good... thats the first time anyone has ever knocked me down like that since I was an apprentice" Shock still filled Glacierstripe's ice-blue irises, Brackenpaw will make a very fine warrior.

[Dansen[Mouse]]

Ooc:// Oh, Brackenpaw and Spicetalon is supposed to Corbynfeather and the dead Amethyststar when everyone returns from battle but I looked in the Battle thing where we posted what injures and when he was brought to the camp and it says that Spicetalon almost died and he has a broken leg... How is he supposed to find them? Think you could talk to Fireh? Brackenpaw and Glacierstripe could find the them instead, if you want =3

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The silver fae's ears shot up and her gray pools shined from the praise the older warrior gave her. She mostly surprised herself. Last time she tried it she had miss judged the distance and had flung herself a few tail lengths away from her target. She alway thought her large frame was too bulky to be throwing it around like that, but the practice apparently paid off. "I-I didn't hurt you, did I?" She asked Glacierstripe, though she doubted she did.

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_{// otey, I pmed Fireh about it}

//Glacierstripe through her head back and started laughing, she suddently stopped to answer the large silver apprentice. "No you didn't... but thanks for asking" Her voice wasn't gentle anymore, it was her comanding voice now the one everyone trys to avoid. The silver femme walked to stand infront of Brackenpaw "Lets go hunting while we're out here so our den-mates, when the get back, can have something to eat" I want my aunt, uncle, cousins, and sister to come back, I want them to come back safetly and alive. Glacierstripe would have know idea that soon enough her treacherous cousin would kill her precious aunt.

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"Alright. That sounds good." Brakenpaw agreed, knowing that their Clan would be hungry when they returned. 'If they return...' Her mind echoed before she shook her head to get the thought out and concentrated on the scents around her. She walked towards a bush and opened her mouth to drink in everything through her scent glands. Finally she scented a plump mouse on the other side of the bush. Slowly she dropped down to a hunters crouch and started to stalk around the bush, careful not to brush up against the bush. Finally she spotted the mouse and a heartbeat later, pounced on it. She walked back around the bush with her catch in her mouth.

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Glacierstripe watched as Brackenpaw got into a hunters crouch, the silver tabby sat surveying the apprentice's every move. When she caught the plump mouse Glacierstripe decided to scent the air before giving the large apprentice praise. She could scent a black bird and an unlucky squirrel, she followed the scent until her ice-blue irises caught sight of the dark amber fur. She stalked forward quickly since the fluffy creature was by a tree, the femme didn't even bother to get into a crouch. Glacierstripe launched a leap at the squirrel forcing it up the tree and onto a branch where she aimed her hunt. She clawed quickly up onto the branch above the creature, when she was jumping for the branch the dark amber rodent was on. She quickly changed direction and aimed herself for the forest floor, Glacierstripe grabbed hold of the fluffy tail and pulled her victum down with her. She landed on her paws with the squirrel dead in her maw, she dropped the dead body and scraped dirt over it. Glacierstripe turned her exhasted ice-blue irises toward Brackenpaw "That was a good catch you got. Just never try what I did, it takes a lot out of you..." Glacierstripe felt old as she sat down with a sigh.

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Brackenpaw watched as Glacierstripe started towards the squirrel, curious as to way she wasn't stalking it. She then watched as Glacierstripe pounced up into the tree and back down with the squirrel in her mouth. She nodded as the Warrior told her to not try it, but in the back of her mind she gathered every detail, ready to try it sometime anyway. She looked down and dropped the mouse so she could scrap some earth over it and hid a smile after Glacierstripe practically said that she was old with the last comment and with the way that she had sat down.

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Ooc:// And they pick up their fresh-kill and head back to camp XD Sorry for the rush and pp