i^i [Heronsong] i^i

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I am dubbed Heronsong

I walk a proud she-cat

I've sang my song for 40 moons

I run with BrightClan

I'm considered to be a warrior

[.Beutiful.Heron.By.The.Pond.]

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Heronsong's body is smooth and lithe. She is skinny with long, slender legs. Her fur is a light color of blue-gray with a white chest. Her small paws are painted in white, along with her long, slender tail's tip. Her shining jewels of eyes are turquoise green. Her triangular ears are no larger than a normal cat's, and her muzzle is somewhat short, tipped with a black nose and edged with long whikers that hang below her head. The fur around her eyes is faded to white, and the markings stretch to just below her ears.

[.Sweet.Song.Of.My.Heart.]

Heronsong is beautiful inside and out. She is sweet and caring, and she will help any cat in need. She is still loyal to her Clan and will fight with all her heart, but she will not kill an enemy cat unless they are endangering another cat's life. She will also tell cats when they've done something wrong, but she'll ease her way into it and explain it as nicely as possible. She is rarely angry, but when she is, you'd wish you're in StarClan. It doesn't happen often, but she can lash a cat with her tongue. I guess she can't be nice all of the time!

[.A.Simple.Story.][/color]

Heronsong became a warrior earlier than her siblings, being calm and fast-learning. She mated with a warrior named Sharktooth. But she didn't know how horrible he was. His charming looks and gentle words were like hypnotism.

She had kits with him, one dying during birth-their only she-kit. The rest were toms. Sharktooth was given one as an apprentice-Jawpaw. He was the one who looked up to his father the most. Sharktooth trained him to be brutal and merciless.

One day, Sharktooth and Jawpaw invited the other two kits and their mentors to come hunting with them. The two had planned this for a long time. They killed the two kits and their mentors, blaming it on a fox when they were back in the camp. But Jawpaw wasn't really like his father. He realized how horrible he felt. So when his father was explaining how they supposedly died, Jawpaw said what really happened. The rest of the Clan understood that Jawpaw was young, looked up to his father. and didn't really understand, but Sharktooth was exiled.

One day, Heronsong found him wandering BrightClan territory and killed him. He was told never to come on territory again for one, and two, Heronsong hated him for briefly poisoning Jawpaw's mind and killing their kits and their mentors.

Jawpaw was hit by a Twoleg monster later and was killed.

[.Those.Special.Words.]

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[SHADE. :D]

Can you add some more to the description?

[[xoxo] shard. :)]

Okay, done. Is that good?

[SHADE. :D]

Actually, can you add a bit more to the personality, too? Sorry, I should have said that before. v_v Sorry.

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Nah, that's okay, shadeh. Well, is that good.

[SHADE. :D]

Thanks. n__n; Accepted.