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Post by twix on Feb 17, 2008 13:36:14 GMT -5
Name: Tearstained
Gender: She-cat
Age: 16 moons
Clan: EclipseClan
Rank: Warrior
Looks: Tearstained's legs are short, and her body sturdy. So she is not the fastest runner but can fight well with her strong mucles and sharp mind. Her long, soft pelt is a soft shade of light gray. She has tabby stripes that are a slightly darker gray, almost blue in the sun, that seem to trickle down her shoulders, flanks, and back. She has a mark under each startelingly blue eye that looks like she had been crieing for an eternity, and that is why she was named Tearkit. When she walks her haunches sway in a rythmic motions and her plume of a tail will either wave in the air like a feather, or drag in the dust. Depending on her mood.
Actions: Tearstained puts up a strong front, and she pretends to be happy. But inside she's a gathering of storm clouds that brude and make her heat herself more, and more every time she does something wrong, or lets someone down. But she never lets her insecurities show, she has to stay strong for her Clan, so she can protect the weak and honor her ancestors. But when ever she finds herself alone she crumples under the cruel reality that she has no kin, and will most likely never find a mate, when all she really wants is to have kits of her own so she can share her love. But for now she just keeps her mouth shut and take out her stress in patrols, hunting, or battles.
Past: She always seemed happy. Tearstained wasn't always an emotional time bomb waiting to elxplode on herself, she used to be a bubbly and happy as she seems. She was always close to her mother, and never went a day without talking to her or visiting her. But when she joined the elders Tearstained just came to the den every day, but her mother grew sick, and soon died from a bad case of black cough, that's when Tearstained's life spiraled downward, she didn't leave camp from nearly a moon after she went with the elders to bury her mother, and she soon lived up to her name. Gently crieing herself to sleep every night.
In Character: She loved the trees, her short legs and sturdy frame helped her balance easily on any branch that would hold her. Tearstained looked out over the forest, breathing in the fresh air, and prey scent. She had always love to come here with her mother as a kit, but her mother never let her climb. Tearstained smiled to herself, she remembered the first time she had climbed a tree, as an apprentice she had dragged her mother out of camp to watch. "Oh, how nice, dear!" her mother praised, making Tearpaw's blue eyes light up with delight. But that moment was gone, and so was her mother. Normaly pain would twist her heart and Tearstained would crumple under the weight of sorrow, but not now. She had to be strong now, her mother was watching her, and she needed to be strong. For her.
Relationships/Kin: Lunarmist ||Mother|| Ashface ||Father|| Both dead, Lunarmist of sickness and Ashface in a battle.
Other: none...
Codewords: Poison, Tears, Crash, Down. |
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Post by (aurora) of the problematique on Feb 17, 2008 14:00:13 GMT -5
Can you add more to her personality please :]
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Post by twix on Feb 17, 2008 14:11:20 GMT -5
Name: Snowpaw
Gender: Tomcat
Age: 11 moons
Clan: EclipseClan
Rank: Apprentice
Looks: His pelt was strange, and still is. Snowpaw's pelt is an extreamly light gray that is almost white, with gray dapples adorned all over his body (except for her under belly) but each gray dapple is ringed with a darker gray line. So the apprentice has the appearance of a snow leopard. With a broad face, and flat head, he even has slightly rounded ears that normaly lay flat with either annoyance of another cat or are up right with interest to learn. Or his broad shoulders and powerful legs, with mucles that ripple and pulse under his dappled fur when he moves. His gray-blue eyes are starting to turn yellow, like a real leoperd or panther.
Actions: Snowpaw swaggers around camp with a false sense of authority over kits and younger apprentices. His words are usualy too thought through and sometimes sound like an unintelligent slur. But he's learning that knowledge comes with age, and will hopefully stop looking like an idiot in time for his warrior cerimony. But no promises can be made, because the thick-headed apprentice can't seem to grasp the concept that he can do things wrong.
Past:
Kit hood:
He was always the strongest, fastest, and not the smartest of his litter. Snowpaw's mother loved him, probably more than her two other kits. Snowkit was always pushy, and bossy and down right arrogent. Wingedkit and Acidkit. Needless to say Acidpaw hates his brother to this day for stealing the effection of their mother, but Wingedpaw doesn't mind. She was glad, she hated the spot light.
Apprenticeship:
The day of his apprenticeship Snowpaw was thrilled, his father was made his mentor, Marshfur. The brown tabby took great pride in his son, and tought him to fight and hunt. But tragedy struck when Marshfur charged into battle one day, Snowpaw wanted to go. The young apprentice pleaded for the chance to defend his Clan, but Marshfur pushed him away, he wanted his son safe. When the battle party came back Marshfur was amung them, limp and hanging off Snowpaw's mother's back. The she-cat told Snowpaw his father died bravely, and it was true. She soon fell into a deep depression, and died. Snowpaw to this day does the best he can to honor his father, and is waiting for Amythesyeststar to appoint a new mentor.
In Character: Not wanting to disturb his sister Snowpaw slipped out of the den carefully, but he was too late. Wingedpaw was poking her head out of the den as soon as Snowpaw got out. "Where on earth are you going to early?" the small tortoise shell asked, looking at the milky lights of dawn. "Hunting." Snowpaw grunted, shaking his thick pelt angerly. "And no, you can't come." he growled. Wingedpaw blinked, her grey eyes swam with interest now. "Just for that I am!" she mewed in a matter of fact tone. "Wonderful!" Snowpaw muttered. "Because I really want your loud chattering while I'm trying to hunt!" he hissed, his tounge thick with sarcasm. Wingedpaw smirked "Good." she purred, whisking past her brother and out of camp. Snowpaw looked up at the sky and swore under his breath "Dear StarClan, help me not kill her." he mumbled, pounding out of the camp after his stubborn sister.
Relationships/Kin: Wingedpaw ||sister|| Acidpaw ||Brother|| Marshfur ||father|| Blizzardtail ||mother||
Other: nupe!
CodewordsPoison, Tears, Crash, Down. |
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Post by twix on Feb 17, 2008 14:11:35 GMT -5
Certainly!
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Post by SHADE. :D on Feb 18, 2008 6:44:53 GMT -5
Can you add to Snowpaw's description, personality and history, please? |
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Post by twix on Feb 18, 2008 14:42:07 GMT -5
Name: Wingedpaw
Gender: She-cat
Age: 11 moons
Clan: EclipseClan
Rank: Apprentice
Looks:
She's striking. With a soft deep gray pelt, and rippled of light ginger, gray, and brown laced intracatly through her pelt.Including two small white wing-shaped markings on the heels of her back paws. But Wingedpaw's under belly, chin , and tail tip are a pure white like snow. She's taller than most cats her age, due to her long limbs and lithe frame. Wingedpaw can run fast and has amazing stanima, she can than LeopardClan up and down for her ability to run and her dappled pelt. Her deep amber eyes usualy spark with interest and any unusual behavior or speak of battle, she'll be up and ready to join a patrol or raid party before you can say "Mouse."
Actions:
Her airy personality will soon turn into a scorching forest fire if you insult Wingedpaw or her kin. The gentle tortoise shell will probably rip your whiskers out one by one if you get her worked up enough. But she can be fun-loving and hyper as any normal she-cat apprentice, she also loves the forest and it's scent. She loves to run and hunt, but hates rouges. She wants to fall in love so badly that she usualy trips into kitten love over random tomcats.
Past:
Kithood:
Wingedkit was always energetic, but only in green leaf and new leaf. For some strange reason all her energy was drained from her in leaf bare, and towards the end of leaf fall. Wingedkit's mother could never find out why, but she just guessed that
Wingedkit was just a happy kit and hated bad weather, it is still a mystery to this day.
apprenticeship:
Wingedpaw's mentor is Foxfire. Wingedpaw admires the tomcat, and looks up to him for advice and encouragement. But Wingedpaw finds herself only talking to Foxfire and Acidpaw most days, not Snowpaw. For some reason Wingedpaw only associates with her younger brother when he's up to something. Acidpaw doesn't talk to Snowpaw at all.
In Character:
Taking in a deep breath of air Wingedpaw smiled, she loved rain. It was odd, she usualy hated bad weather, but there was something about rain in green leaf... the small tortoise shell rolled her shoulders and strutted out of the apprentices' den and into the main clearing, she could see the angry glare of Acidpaw as he watched her. Probably wondering why she was being so stupid. Wingedpaw turned around and sat Tearstained, whiskers twitching with ammusment at the small she-cat. "Nice day!" the warrior mewed playfully. Wingedpaw nodded "It really is!" she grinned back. Her tailed waved excidedly as she glanced around camp. "Tell Foxfire I'm going hunting!" she called to Tearstained, above the pounding of the rain on the dirt-packed ground. The other she-cat nodded. Wingedpaw laughed lightly and raced out of camp.
Relationships/Kin:
Marshfur ||Father|| Blizzardtail ||Mother|| Snowpaw ||brother|| Acidpaw ||Brother||
Other:
Codewords: Tears, Poison, Crash Down
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Post by SHADE. :D on Feb 19, 2008 5:06:36 GMT -5
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Post by twix on Feb 19, 2008 10:14:44 GMT -5
haha
One more cat
sorry, sorry
I will play them all
Just need to make Acidpaw!
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Post by twix on Feb 19, 2008 11:11:30 GMT -5
Name: Acidpaw
Gender: Tomcat
Age: 11 moons
Clan: EclipseClan
Rank: Apprentice
Looks:
Acidpaw gets his name from his acid green eyes. Blizzardtail haden't named him early on like the other kits, but when he opened his eyes. He never had dusky blue eyes when he was born, like Wingedkit or Snowkit, he always had peircing green eyes, that contrasted with his pitch black fur. With an impressive out come. But Acidpaw is not a solid black cat, if you look closely at him you can see mottled dark black patches in his fur, so in a sense he is a tortoise shell, like Wingedpaw. Acidpaw isn't the tallest cat, or the strongest, or the fastest, he's just smart. His intelligence goes paw and paw with his looks, really. Wingedpaw always tells him that any she-cat would kill for him, if he'd talk to some of them.
Actions:
He's very secretive, and only really talks to Wingedpaw. The she-cat loves her brother, but he is very strange. He'll only verbaly answer a question if he must, other than that he uses his own weird sign language. The small black cat knows it makes others mad, but he doesn't want to talk to the Clan cats, he figures he'll talk tomorrow, or the next day, or maybe after that. But he only speaks to Wingedpaw, and it troubles her deeply, Snowpaw doesn't give a damn, and that's why Acidpaw hates him.
Past:
Kithood:
He was always the runt of the litter, but older than Snowpaw, younger than Wingedpaw. Always haveing the attention on Snowpaw never phased Acidpaw, he liked to be alone. He often used to wander into the medicine den, and sit unseen and watch the medicine cat work. But he never wanted to be a medicine cat, he wanted to fight, to prove he was worthy.
Apprenticeship:
His father's death didn't make a difference in Acidpaw's life, he even forgot he had a father, due to the lack of attention. But Acidpaw just keeps in any kind of shadow, and loves the forest after is rains. Most of the time no one can find Acidpaw, and he'll come casualy strolling into camp.
In Character:
Snowpaw was getting on his nerves. Acidpaw simply walked away, Wingedpaw spat some angry words at her younger brother before racing after Acidpaw into the trees. "He doesn't know what he's talking about!" the she-cat cried. "The Clan does need you!" Acidpaw winced, the words stung no matter what infliction they where said under. Snowpaw had made it painfully clear that the Clan didn't need him, and he was going to leave. Wingedpaw stopped in her tracks. "You're only proving him right, you know." she said quietly. Acidpaw hissed and spun around, facing his sister. "Am I?" he hissed. "How very childish of me then, perhaps I should go and beg for Snowpaw's forgivness?" the words hit Wingedpaw like poison arrows. "No." she replied quietly "Just come back." at that moment the pounding of prematurely grown paws hitting earth reached Acidpaw's ears. "Get back here you coward!" Snowpaw yowled, his chest heaving. "That's what you always do, right?" he hissed "Run?" he got right in his brother's face. "Run away because things don't work out for you?" Acidpaw hissed. "What the f**k do you know!?" he hissed. "You're the goddamned favroite, everything goes your way!" Acidpaw lashed out and caught his brother's face. Snowpaw back up and hissed coldly "What the hell?" he snapped. "Go cry about it!" Acidpaw snarled, the small black apprentice turned tail and ran off. Wingedpaw glared at Snowpaw coldly "You, dumbass." she growled, and hared after her brother.
Relationships/Kin: ||see Wingedpaw||
Other: non
Codewords: Poison, Tears, Crash, Down.
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Post by twix on Feb 19, 2008 15:18:14 GMT -5
Now, I'm done!
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Post by SHADE. :D on Feb 21, 2008 5:04:25 GMT -5
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