Post by (aurora) of the problematique on Apr 14, 2009 20:31:31 GMT -5
I'm sort of on a tipsy see-saw about the names of the relations. Cinnamon is a plant and also a color, alright. Spicepaw is fine, as cats know about spices. Sugarpaw, though. I don't think cats would know what sugar is, as it is food. Even if the sister's warrior name would've been Sugarcane or something, it's still dodgy. Could you possibly change it to perhaps another spice or herb? Marigoldpaw perhaps?
Can you also add to her description? It's a bit lacking compared to the length of her personality and history. Check the other accepted biographies and the bio guideline for some tips.
Also, to make your post neater, could you please use font? Thanks :]
Can you also add to her description? It's a bit lacking compared to the length of her personality and history. Check the other accepted biographies and the bio guideline for some tips.
Also, to make your post neater, could you please use font? Thanks :]
