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Post by Cinder! no study! X_X on Mar 23, 2009 19:10:09 GMT -5
Name: Fallenpaw---watcher
Definition: having dropped or come down from a higher place, from an upright position, or from a higher level, degree, amount, quality, value, number, etc
Gender: Tom
Age: 6 moons
Clan: Eclipse C.
Rank:Apprentice
Looks: A black tom, not too big--slightly small but with wide shoulders that make him look larger than he really is. His primary physical-trait is his body. It ripples and flexes with strength. He tries to be as fit as possible--Fallenpaw couldn’t throw you across the Apprentice Den but he could definitely hurl his small body at you and make you fall to the ground. Strength is needed for the world is dark and things that go bump in the night wont care if you're pretty, or smart, or compassionate. Fallenpaw is ready for the bullies, StarClan shunning cats, rogues and other predators who will try to slice him to bits with strong nails and long fangs.
His eyes are unremarkable. They are simply always fixated on the most interesting or powerful cat in the vicinity. You naturally follow his line of sight and become mesmerized by what it is he sees. His eyes are not for watching, they are for finding something better to stare at like an idiot. Most couldn’t tell you the color is if you asked them to off the top of their head but a few, Dragonrush, his brothers... his dead mother--they could all tell you his eyes were Amber and not gorgeous or captivating. It does not matter the color of the light that shines through his eyes, only why they shine and what they shine for (i dunno what i just said)
Not as bulky and manly as say, his brother Paintedpaw, this youthful tom is still a good macho-man when he needs to be. Puffing of the chest, flashing of the eyes as they force contact, unsheathing of his brittle claws and the hiss that erupts from far inside that fanged mouth. He is a good warrior who will always stand up for any cat and is fine with scaring a snot-nosed el stupido mean cat with his dark looks.
Actions: A shy, quiet cat who at first seems like the, ‘sensitive song/singer guy,’ with a splash of kindness and a dab of love. This is not the whole of Fallenpaw, some may mistaken his kind words and sugar-coated truths for weakness. They may say, ‘what you don’t wanna tell me the truth straight up?’ as he attempts to not hurt their feelings. Fallenpaw always replies kindness is not weakness, to underestimate a compassionate cat with a huge heart and spirited soul is to lose the game you play.
Any cat smart enough to understand Fallenpaw or at least not bicker with im for sounding so Guru-ish and actually smarter than the one spoken to is fine in Fallenpaw’s book. Those who scorn him will face his wrath—this young apprentice hates bullies and will stand up for the underdog. He’s a protector but he’s not offensive. He’ll defend you in a fight but don’t look to him to start one with an enemy, Fallenpaw isn’t one to get his claws dirty with the blood of a Clan Mate or fellow Clanner in general.
He’s not physical to start and prefers to be a, ‘referee,’ if he and his siblings or friends play a game. Fallenpaw just isn’t that into burning up all his energy to have some, ‘fun’ (wink-wink) he’d rather do something productive or just rest his body before going to do something productive.
Very respectful, Fallenpaw is known as an honorable and noble warrior who would never stab you in the back. When fighting he plans to never kill and if he must it would be a quick blow and from the front. Cats should know their killer and have a chance to save themselves. He does not hold any power over what his Clan Mates do but will occasionally point out things they shouldn’t do. He’s a bit of a tattle-tell but only when he feels it will benefit the cat he’s ratting out on. If Fallenpaw was to catch a cross-clan relationship, stealing of prey, or any other un-warrior like things he would tell his leader for surely StarClan would help guide his leader to know what to do for the cat. Don’t do the crime if you won’t do the time.
He doesn’t have a temper but when he feels like it, Fallenpaw just does this thing with his eyes, the way he stands and the curve of his lips to make him menacing. This apprentice has been known to do this to annoying little big-mouth kits or apprentices but he tries to keep it in check. A few other quirks about him is his inability to tell a female apprentice she did well on anything. He feels as though they're a bit scary, Dragonrush certainly could kill you with a flick of her wrist and he's careful about saying the wrong thing to a she-cat. Even something nice seems to be a stretch for the shy tom raised with three brothers and Zippo sisters.
Past: Daffodiltail and Raylight were two of the kindest cats you could ever meet. Daffodiltail had begged her mate to keep away from her physically till they were older, avoiding any mess-ups like her mother. It was a shock when the older she-cat at about 42 moons told her mate she was pregnant, they were happy. Paintedkit, Yellowkit and Fallenkit were born and enjoyed bliss and peace for their early moons. Three toms did of course equal a few small manly-fights but they got along very well with each other and their parents. When Pandakit, an abused Nursery-Mate began to think of Fallenkit’s family as his own Fallenkit was fine with that.
What followed was tragic for as Pandakit became a brother. Given a new member to the small family seemed to make it so they had to lose one. The foster-brothers real parents killed Daffodiltail and for awhile Fallenkit was not able to truly think of Pandakit without a few curses and devastation in his mind. He grew up and the remaining Queens cared for his three brothers and himself. His aunt Dragonrush, closest to him, rubbed off on him as he hardened and Fallenpaw loves to be compared to her.
In Character: --
Relationships/Kin:
Parents- Daffodiltail and Raylight
Brothers- Paintedpaw and Yellowpaw
Foster Bro- Pandapaw
Aunts- Dragonrush and Lightmist
Uncles- Pondwaters and Crossclaw
Other: Fallenpaw's colors are blue and teal.
Codewords: PaintingPortraitsOfGhosts |
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Post by idk my bff brindle on Mar 23, 2009 19:41:23 GMT -5
I'm confused. First you say that Fallenpaw is nice, shy and gentle and would never kill, but two paragraphs later you say he's really mean and he hates other Clans and he would rip other intruders to shreds because he's a dynamo. [/blockquote] |
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Post by Cinder! no study! X_X on Mar 23, 2009 20:03:28 GMT -5
ooc-  sorry, i wrote this half yesterday and half today. lemme just delete that paragraph |
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Post by (aurora) of the problematique on Mar 23, 2009 23:19:39 GMT -5
Er...Fallenpaw's sexist? That's nowhere in his personality description. It's alright to take some liberties but that's when you're starting to develop the character. If he's going to have this blatantly different quirk, then you have to make it so something in his life makes him that way. For example, in the history where it talks about how he can't think of Pandapaw without muttering some curses.
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Post by Cinder! no study! X_X on Mar 23, 2009 23:21:22 GMT -5
can fix. one second.
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Post by SHADE. :D on Mar 24, 2009 10:32:27 GMT -5
There are a few minor spelling errors - would you mind checking through it? ^^ |
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Post by Cinder! no study! X_X on Mar 24, 2009 18:25:16 GMT -5
Sure. Cinder here <---points to self, has to work on a list of things to do before posting a thread or just post. Hmm, actually shade i think that would be a good little part of the school aurrie created, a list of useful things ot do before posting, like 1. check spelling 2. remember font, and boldness
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Post by SHADE. :D on Mar 25, 2009 11:51:11 GMT -5
Good idea. ^^
And thanks; accepted. |
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sorry, i wrote this half yesterday and half today. lemme just delete that paragraph
