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Post by Cinder! no study! X_X on Mar 19, 2009 21:11:50 GMT -5
Name: Wildpath
Definition: living in a state of nature; not tamed or domesticated: a wild animal; wild geese.
Gender: male
Age: 39 moons
Clan: BrightClan
Rank: Warrior
Looks:
Wildpath isn’t the best looking tom in the known world... er well he isn’t much of a looker in the unknown world too but anyways... He is scarred and of average size, his leopard-like pelt has spots and stripes and little swirls everywhere that could make any cat dizzy just looking at.
Then of course in addition he had to be a clumsy cat who just had to prove himself all the time by getting stuck in a bramble bush one time, challenging a neighboring Clan while he was alone, tripping and falling into a pile of sharp rocks while he writhed around stupidly and being #1 Most Attacked By Crazy & Suicidal Prey. The guy is not to lucky when it comes to anything having to do with claws and fangs.
He’s really just not the winner of the Genetic Lottery. He's more of that guy who won the Lottery as a cute little kit and bragged to some, 'lesser being,' about it then got his butt whipped and his lotto-prize stolen. Then maybe getting beaten up again. He has a few cute little traits like his fluffy ears, pink nose and twitchy whiskers but they just make him seem more like a cocky kit then a fierce warrior. His aura makes all the difference, a fierce, proud, and comical inside makes him slightly more attractive than your average road-kill.
He has pretty lemon green eyes too which is about the only trait he's extremely proud of (that and his, 'battle scars,' the ones that make him look more 'warrior-like') He has a long tail that is just great in keeping his body warm during colder seasons and used as a fan during warm times. The rest of his body is very average in size, height, etc. His claws are easily broken and he complains about them a lot to himself (too much of an ego to tell anybody else) his teeth are scary and very bitey but how often do you get to sink your teeth into some other cat, and how gross would it be if you got err, deep into that other cat? He's afraid to get his mouth stuck on some poor badly skilled apprentice such as he was. The guy is nice but truly scares a few potential friends off with his bad looks.
Actions:
Friendly, exciting, enthusiastic... this doesn’t even cover the whole of this cat. Wildpath is insanely into community and helping his fellow cat with a huge lop-sided grin. If some average joe-shmoe cat suddenly was sent on some huge quest of the ages he'd be the comic-relief sidekick or the stupid and clueless victim to the bad guys wrath.
He's not the brightest light at a Rock Concert but he isn’t plain dumb. If he was then well... bad looks+ stupidity= useless. Wildpath is caring and great to hang around with, he has a huge amount of god-worship and respect for any high position cat, good warrior, senior warrior, queen, or elder and bundles of, 'wisdom,' to share with all the rest. He likes being considered cool by younger generations but isn’t easily manipulated most times.
The tom isn’t a big fan of the ideal: find mate, fall in love, have kits; He's more of a free-spirit with a side order or, 'I wish I had a family.' Not a huge thinker Wildpath knows to honor StarClan but he doesn’t give the all-mighty cats the time of day. (Personally he'll tell you, 'oh well its daytime, or i guess its night now!) Wildpath isn’t one to be snide or even remotely rude to most cats but he has a sense of self-preservation and won’t just bow down before the first dictator or bully he comes across! (Trust me he'd be a mindless minion to about 20 cats if he had)
Wildpath has retained some of his youthful innocence but strangely enough does not fear death, he's thought of it and all but doesn’t see the problem if he's headed straight to StarClan. The warrior enjoys life and doesn’t want to be some fretty, worry-wart, wisdom cat just yet but he will eventually start to like the idea (hopefully before its to late for him to start) Fun and although not particularly wild this cat has his paws on the path of greatness. (Well, if he gets over his obsession with mouse-tails, suddenly isn’t clumsy anymore and gets a good sense of reality that is)
Past:
Born to a kittypet and a warrior father Wildkit was apparently named with the suffice, 'Wild,' for he was born outside of the kittypet's garden (she claimed it was the Wild, yes those seas of rolling concrete and asphalt streets with cookie-cutter houses on both sides and happy children playing around in yards is the wild.)
She gave her kit to her mate to bring back to his Clan for she feared what would happen if she was to raise a half-feral cat and didn’t want other kitty-pets to start asking questions. Saber-Tooth (or Thalia) returned to her blissful life as a kittypet and had many other affairs and kits to go around!
Meanwhile her poor first-born, Wildkit suffered in a Clan who accepted him barely. His father was ashamed and felt sorely for his kit. Soon his father asked the Clan to keep his identity a secret from Wildkit only a few days later. The Can grudgingly agreed, deciding they didn’t need a traumatized young kit and Wildkit grew to believe all she-cats to be his mother figure and all toms his father. He was happy and always had witty comments.
Wildpaw wasn’t really gifted and one time heard his mentor mutter, 'kittypet,' under her breath but he's ignored all evidence of dislike in his Clan and is slightly delusional trying to fit everything into a nice little reality he's made up. Wildpaw was popular simply because he was willing to help anybody and never was mean, well, once there was a cat who was terribly snaky and got on his bad side but just ask him about the scar on his left flank right next to the other two scars around there (if he remembers how he got it)
Wildpath was made a warrior at around 12 moons and happily lives the life of a warrior and although he has no skill in his trade is fine with hunting for his Clan and occasionally helping out apprentices of they need. He's nice like that and loves being known as, 'cool,' amongst the apprentices. They are after all the cats who will feed and take care of him, protect and listen to him once he grows to be an Elder.
In Character: --
Relationships/Kin:
Mother- Saber Toothed Thalia
Father- ?
Siblings- (half sibs) Snare, Dittanysong, Flying With Pam, Jumbo Shrimp, Pudding Cake, Dog, Spike, Drew, James, Giles, and Chicoryblue
Codewords: Painting Portraits of Ghosts
Other: His color is brown and two of his half-sibs are warriors, Dittanysong (a young female in EC) and Chicoryblue ( an older tom in SC) they will be made one day.
ooc- there are two more cats ill be making for the next say... 5-4 months. they are the first generation so after they get older and maybe one dies ill start introducing the second gneration (see my list of cats plan) |
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Post by SHADE. :D on Mar 20, 2009 10:29:05 GMT -5
This is pretty good, but it'd ne helpful if you could split your description, personality and history into two or more paragraphs. It makes it easier to read. And some of your sentences are really long. You might want to put in some comma's or full stops, because I got a bit lost.
Thanks. ^^ |
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Post by Cinder! no study! X_X on Mar 20, 2009 17:02:53 GMT -5
you dont know how much i just laughed. -sigh- i was on another site that said, 'you use too many commas, and its like your cheating when you do a bucnh of paragrpahs now i have to do that! its hilarious to me, but yeah thats fine. uno momento.
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Post by SHADE. :D on Mar 21, 2009 10:33:52 GMT -5
xD Well, I just think it looks tidier if you split up huge paragraphs.
Accepted, anyway. |
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