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Post by SHADE. :D on Nov 15, 2006 11:29:52 GMT -5
The leader will be chosen by me, and will be purely the best roleplayer. Firestar, if you wish to keep your position, you must fight hard. Use the normal biography form, please. Good luck to everyone.
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Post by feather on Nov 15, 2006 21:05:04 GMT -5
[ They call me] Shatteredstar
40 Moons
Tom
MoonClan
Leader
[back away slowly] Pride. Shatteredstar has a sense of pride like no other; as battered and broken as he is, his pride has always been his closest companion. He despises admitting defeat, as he belives true cats never back down, no matter the cost. Ruthlessness. Killing? No hesitiations. He will kill, although not normally in cold blood. Offerend him, and you will surely pay. Would you fancy a set of scars across your muzzle? Or a shredded ear? Well if you don't, watch your tongue. Cunning. One of his prized qualities. His tonue is a sharp as his claws, and leaves scars almost as deep. His wits are never lost, but ready at hand, and he makes sure they stay sharp. Hate. Ah, hate. He keeps it close, and nourishes it. Keeps the flame ignited, and it grows like a weed. His hate is his motivation; it is just as useful in battle as his teeth or his claws. He feels hate towards most things, as a result of his cruel past. Love. Love? Affection? He hardly knows the meaning of these words. everything he has ever loved has caused is stained heart to break, time and time again. So now he is extremely careful not to get too attatched to anything, for fear of what might happen...
All of these characteristics make him one of the most feared cats the clans have ever seen. Each quality is unique, and together they can make him sometimes blind to the truth. Pride can easily overrun common sense, if you are not careful. And I regret to say he is not.
Description: History:
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Post by SHADE. :D on Nov 16, 2006 11:19:16 GMT -5
If it's SerenityClan, why post it here? 0-0
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Post by reflect on Nov 16, 2006 15:46:05 GMT -5
There's no thread for SerenityClan! And I already started typing it before I realized it was MoonClan. =\
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Post by FIREH!! on Nov 17, 2006 8:48:43 GMT -5
Name: Firestar
Gender: She-cat
Age: 58 moons
Clan: Moonclan
Rank: Leader
Looks: Fire blowing in the wind Firestar's color is of purest of all pure, orange. Orange like the fire of a sunset, glowing on her pelt forever. Swips of white flow through her fur, making it look like fire, blowing in the wind. Black muzzle, always appearing first when she thrusts her nose through bracken. No one doesn't wonder why her name isn't Foxstar. Her big black paws are always throwing up dirt and sand and dust while they make no noise. Clumsy as she is, she is always balanced with her black tipped tail. Her pricked ears of black and orange, hear all the noises on patrol, hunting the clumsy mice, or sleeping. Anywhere she will hear the noises. Or see them with her ice blue eyes. Her eyes betray her sunset fur, making it look like a sunset in Leaf-Bare. Ice blue eyes missing nothing.
Actions: Sweet, kind, nice. All the things you would usually expect in a she-cat. Not this one. Firestar is harsh. Her personality comes from when she was a kit. Her foul temper makes it hard for other cats to respect her. But she is only harsh when her cats disobey her. She is judgemental, meaning she will not immediately accuse someone of the crime until she has all the facts. Then, she will bring out the harsh side. Of course, she is a nice cat sometimes. To her mate, Thornheart, she will always be kind. When there is a new litter, she will come and see them immediately, sometimes even sitting next to the queen while she is giving birth, comforting her.
The loss of a cat in her clan is for her too much to bear. Her clan is her children. She can never lose any of them, including Wovenknot, Littleheart and Thornheart to name a few. To lose a cat is like a thorn stabbing through her heart. She yowls and cries and deliberately scratches herself, blaming herself for the death. Feeling sorry for a while. Usually a few days. Then, she gets into her usual self.
Past: Kithood When Firestar was a kit, her mother was loving, kind and was always sweet. Her father though, was a viscious beast. He would torment none of his kits but Firekit, knowing that her mother favoured her. Her father hated her mother, tormenting her aswell. Usually grabbing both of them, dragging them out into the dark, unforgiving forest, and beating them.
Apprenticeship When Firestar was Firepaw, bad things happened. First, all of her sisters and brothers died on a journey to the Gathering, where they got attacked by dogs. That was when Moonclan was thriving. They had brought seven apprentices, ten warriors, and the Medicine Cat, Deputy, and Leader. Luckily, Firepaw wasn't there. Four of the apprentices died, four of the warriors died. When they came back, they told Firepaw what had happened. All the remaining warriors brought back the bodies and Firepaw lay by her siblings sides and weeped. Soon after, her father dissapeared, leaving her in more grief than she could ever imagine.
Warriorship Knowing that Firepaw needed to be a warrior, the day after the Gathering, they held her Warrior Ceremony. Naming her Firewind, she promised to the warrior code and began her vigil. During that vigil, however, the same rogues that attacked the Moonclan patrol at the Gathering, attacked the camp! Firewind screeched and attacked them, grief welling up inside of her, giving her strength to fight. She saw her parents fight, but her parents were fighting against eachother. She immediately realized who was a rogue. Her father. Hissing and spitting at the rogue she was fighting, she bit in it's leg and it tore away. Then, she leaped at her father. "This is for when I was a kit!" She slashed at his throat. But, another cat showed up and killed him. Stepping back, numb to the noises around, She was shaking. "Daddy?" she whispered, pressing close to him. "Daddy..." she began to weep again. Soon after the battle finished, her mother was gone. She pulled her body to her and her dad's and began her week long vigil.
Deputyship After that battle, the old leader, Razorstar, dissapeared, leaving Thornheart in control. Thornheart who was then Thornstar, picked his first deputy, Winterfire. Not soon after, Winterfire died. Then, love overtaking Thornstar's body, he chose Firewind to be deputy. She worked for him and helped him through everything. Being a loyal deputy and friend, she was always there for him. Then, it happened. Her best friend, Darkmoon, died. Grief overpowered her once again and she wouldn't leave her side. Finally, after some days, she buried Darkmoon. Buried her beside her sisters and brothers, mother and father. Letting Darkmoon know that she will always be special to her. Battle after battle, tearshed after tearshed, it happened. Thornstar gave up his last life to protect his clan against Chaosfire. Firewind stared at his body in horror. Then, she swore vengance against Chaosfire, knowing that it was her who had killed her siblings and parents. She got her nine lives and is now living somewhat peacefully.
In Character: The long awaited CHARACTER SKETCH!!! LOL This is when she was the Deputy and when Wovenknot was Wovenpaw.
Fire blowing in the wind
Ice blue eyes scanned the undergrowth for prey. They detected mouse. The fire-colored cat pounced on the mouse and its screams were cut off quickly by a bite to the neck. Firewind buried the mouse and continued on, searching for more prey. She trotted to an old oak tree, white paws barely making a sound. There was a scent of vole nearby and she quickly dropped into the hunter’s crouch. The leaves under her paws barely crunched as she snuck up behind the vole. She reached it and pounced. It yelped in surprise and ran, but Firewind was quicker. She reached the vole, who was hiding in a hole in a tree, and bit its neck.
Soon, she had enough prey to bring back to the clan. She picked up the three mice, two voles, and chaffinch. Firewind trotted through the pine woods to her camp. She entered through the bramble thicket that marked the camp entrance, and dropped off her prey onto the pile. She picked out a rabbit for herself and brought it over to her apprentice, Wovenpaw. “ We’ll train later, okay?” she asked. “ Okay!” responded Wovenpaw, “I can’t believe Thornstar made you his deputy! Wow!” “Okay, this is the hunter’s crouch,” Firewind meowed. She demonstrated the hunter’s crouch perfectly, springing up and landing onto a leaf silently. “Now you try.” Wovenpaw, on her three legs, dropped swiftly and perfectly into the hunter’s crouch, also springing onto a leaf without making a sound. “For a cat with three legs, that was perfect! Even if you hadn’t lost that leg when you were born, that was perfect!” Firewind cried. She licked her apprentice on top of the head and the pair went hunting. Ice blue eyes missing nothing.
Relationships/Kin: Mate: Thornheart Sisters: (all deceased) Musicpaw, Tearpaw. Brothers:(all deceased) Drumpaw, Hunterpaw. Mother:(deceased) Spiritfire. Father:(Deceased) Beastwing.
Other: Nope
Codewords: Poison Tears Crash Down
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Post by FIREH!! on Nov 17, 2006 8:52:06 GMT -5
That took me about an hour and a half! It better be good!!!! ;D LOL
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Post by SHADE. :D on Nov 17, 2006 12:37:12 GMT -5
Congratulations to...
Firewind! Firestar is the winner. The rest of you could go for another leader, if you wanted to.
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Post by FIREH!! on Nov 17, 2006 12:48:15 GMT -5
YAY!!!! THANKYOU!!!!! -huggles tightly-
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