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Post by brook on Nov 27, 2006 11:12:41 GMT -5
Use the normal biography form. I'll pick the best roleplayer. Good luck! And have fun!
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Post by snowstorm on Nov 30, 2006 21:43:25 GMT -5
[I am called Snowstorm]
[I have lived for 20 moons]
[I am blessed a she cat]
[My loyalties lie in Cloudclan]
[I am ranked a deputy]
[This is me] Snowstorm's pelt is pure white as snow. She is longhaired with a long feathery tail that floats like a ghost behind her. Her pelt is of silken fur that stick out every which way around her face. Her whiskers are long a white. Her paws are small like the rest of her. Some apprentices grow taller then her. She has one sharp white claw missing from her right foot. Her battle scars still show from a terrible rebellion. Eyes shimmer like big pools of ice. Sapphire flecks add a certain ocean-like dept to her optics. Sadness, betrayal and shattered remnants of her past are what her eyes show deep within them. I am the Snowstorm
[My attitude] Snowstorm is intelligent and fairly dignified. She tries to hide her sorrow for her past. She always tries to put her clan first. When faced with a difficult situation, she can easily take care of it because of her cooperation skills. She is kind to everyone but deep within her is sadness and pain. She has learned to become feirce and protective of her clan and kin. She accels in battle with her great speed. On swift feet, she will taunt and attack the enemies with great power. A firery temper, it is unwise to flare it up. She is friendly to most cats but she feels empty. No more family, no mate and no kits.
[My shattered past] Snowstorm was born a loner in a barn not too far from clan territory. She had no name because her mother had died at her birth. Her sibling was called Frost. She had lived with her father Shattered who named her Snow. He told her that her mother had been a loner by the name of Storm. One day her father took her to Cloudclan as a mere kit. Her sister died because of blackcaugh. She was given the name Snowkit. Her father was called Shatteredheart and made a warrior of Cloudclan. Her father soon started getting fed up with the warrior code and Cloudclan. He had been influenced by a friend of his named Brokenflame. By that time Snowstorm had just been made an official warrior. She mated with a caring tom named Blackfrost. He loved her dearly and she loved him. Then the terrible day came. Brokenflame led a rebellion against the clans starting with Cloudclan. At the moment the clan and the group of rebels merged, Shatteredheart had seen the light and tried to stop the fighting. Snowstorm was badly wounded in battling alongside Blackfrost. Blackfrost died fighting and killing Brokenflame. The rebellion was fought off and Blackfrost, her father and several Cloudclan cats had perished. Snowstorm had been so torn apart she went mute for a long time. A moon later she gave bith to Blackfrost's kits. There were two. She named one Leafkit and one Brackenkit. Leafkit had been killed after a hawk picked her up. Brackenkit became Brackenpaw. His mentor Flashthunder had let him die to save his own tail from a badger. Snowstorm was shook up again and she took up muteness again. Moons later, an elder helped her carry on and she began speaking again. She later became deputy after the old one Wildfire had died.
[My life] Snowstorm ran through the crowd of slashing and hissing cats. She tried to pinpoint Blackfrost or her father. Shatteredheart was fighting a Cloudclan warrior. Snowstorm pushed off on strong swift paws. She tackled her father and she slashed him in the face, her fury flowing out upon him. Her eyes flashed like an ice cold flame, boring into his. Shatteredheart scrabbled away from her and stood a foot away. "No... Cloudclan is my calling... I won't side with you anyore!" He yowled, turning to Brokenflame who had emerged beside him. Anger bubbled in Brokenflames eyes and he was about to pounce upon Shatteredheart. Blackfrost rushed through the crowd and took Brokenflame down. Snowstorm was frozen with fright and anger. Before she could leap to help Blackfrost, a large tom bowled her over and raked his claws down her sides. She cried out and slashed him in the face. Bloody lines drew across his imense face and droplets of crimson fell into her eyes. She was blinded by the red but so was the rogue. It staggered off of her and bumped into Shatteredheart. Shatteredheart leapt at him and the two became a flurry of claws and fur. She leapt to Blackfrost's side. He had just staggered away from the unmoving body of the rebelious leader. Snowstorm stared at him in horror. His right eye had been slashed out and blood dripped from all over his body. Crimson lines scored his body and his black and white pelt was wet with blood. He fell over and he convulsed. He gave quick raspy breaths. "Blackfrost! No... Don't leave me!" The young she cat pleaded. But Blackfrost suddenly lay still and Snowstorm felt as if the battle around had paused and a familiar scent passed her and drifted with the breeze. Tears rolled down her cheeks and she stood there in her own silence, just feeling Blackfrost slip away. [I love] No one at the moment
[My family] All gone....
[Something else] I need someone to love....
Codewords: Poison Tears Crash Down
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Post by brook on Dec 3, 2006 12:03:30 GMT -5
Do you mind making her a tad older? Other than that, accepted!
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Post by snowstorm on Dec 3, 2006 12:06:31 GMT -5
No problem, thanks ^_^
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Post by brook on Dec 3, 2006 12:09:19 GMT -5
Perfect! Now if you don't mind moving this bio to where you would normally create a bio and Shade can accept it!
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Post by SHADE. :D on Dec 3, 2006 12:12:49 GMT -5
OK. Snowstorm is CloudClan deputy. ^^
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Post by snowstorm on Dec 3, 2006 12:16:41 GMT -5
I posted it in the creations board.
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Post by brook on Dec 3, 2006 12:18:21 GMT -5
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