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Post by Ferny on Feb 13, 2009 20:40:38 GMT -5
Name: Redpaw
Definition: Red is one of the primary colors.
Gender: She-cat
Age:6 Moons
Clan: Serenityclan
Rank: Apprentice
Description:
Redpaw has a short and stout m,muzzle like the rest of her body. Her ears are very large, like her father, Spiceflame's. As for her eyes, the she-cats are smaller than most cats. Redpaw's eyes are a rare aquamarine, and are adored by many.
She has short legs like her Father. Redpaw's tail is extremely long, and unlike the rest of her body, has shorter hair. Much of her body is very large, most of it being thick fur. Her shoulders are broad, like Fernpaws.
Redpaw has a very long-haired pelt, unlike most wild cats. Her pelt is a beautiful tri-colored, like Spiceflame. However, her paws are a blazing red color, giving her the name, Redpaw. She has a few scars, one across her flank and the other on her tail. None of the scars can be seen over all of her fur, though.
Personality:
Redpaw is the exact opposite of her sister, Fernpaw. She loves peace and quiet, and never speaks out of line. The apprentice is very shy, but once she learns to know a cat, shes very social. Besides her outspoken personality, Redpaw is unafraid to stand up when another cat is being unfairly treated. Some of her traits are gained from her father, but not many from her mother.
Redpaw has another side though, one that not many know about. This side of her is cruel and distructive, and wishes to bring pain to her enemies. Only one occation did this part of her ever come out; when a warrior accused her of being unloyal. being a very peacful cat, no one expecting anything like that ever to happen.
Redpaw lives to dream. When she dreams, they're so vivid and life-like. Many would simply enjoy the dreams as they come, but not her. When the apprentice dreams, she'll do everything in her power to make those dreams a reality.
History:
Born of a half-clan cat, she never felt she had a true home. One day when she was 3 moons, her parents got into an argument about where their dear Redkit should live since both parents were of different clans. The argument got deeper, Spiceflame thinking she should live with him in Serenityclan, and Dawnsky thinking the sisters shouldn't be separated. After a while, she sneaked off and ended up in Serentiyclan. Redkit met Fadedstar, and after hearing her story, agreed to keep the secret and allow her to live there with her father. Both parents were shocked when they found this out.
Receiving the name of Redpaw at only 5 moons, the apprentice worked very hard and wanted to do her best. However, she never seems happy in her work. Occasionally, she like to daydream and hopes that someday she may become the clans new medicine cat apprentice.
IC:
Redpaw began to stalk silently within the thin area of trees, her sapphire eyes glowing in the darkness. Continuing forward, the young apprentice paused for a moment to taste the air, scenting for any prey that could be around. Catching the musky smell of a shrew, she began treading on light paws toward the roots of a tall ash. Noticing the creature scuffling around out of the corner of her eye, Redpaw changed directions swiftly without making a sound. The Shrew scuffled around unaware that he was about to meet his death. Lunging forward, her teeth met the scruff of the small creature and she bit into its neck quickly killing it. The mouth-watering scent filled her nostrils and she hesitated temptation prickling her fur. Shanking her head, Redpaw turned, head back for camp to place the shrew on the fresh-kill pile.
Relationships/Kin:
Mother: Dawnsky
Father: Spiceflame
Sister: Fernpaw
Brother: Unknown
Friends:Unknown
Other Friend/Family: Unknown
Codeword: Painting Portraits of Ghosts...
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Post by (aurora) of the problematique on Feb 14, 2009 0:58:52 GMT -5
Pretty much the same thing I said on Fernpaw. :3 Personality and Codewords need to be adjusted.
Also, as this is your second biography, you needn't put another IC post down. It's only for your first (and some like to do it for auditions).
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Post by Ferny on Feb 14, 2009 10:12:22 GMT -5
Painting Portraits of Ghosts..
And I just extended it
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Post by SHADE. :D on Feb 15, 2009 6:04:57 GMT -5
The personality's still a little short. :3 Would you mind adding a little bit more? |
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Post by Ferny on Feb 15, 2009 21:36:03 GMT -5
Sure! It would be much longer, btu sinceI'm on 8 different rping sites I dont have as much time.
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Post by (aurora) of the problematique on Feb 16, 2009 0:19:12 GMT -5
Much better. ^^ Accepted
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