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Post by (aurora) of the problematique on Feb 11, 2009 23:37:31 GMT -5
_______________________eclipseclan I'm putting up Pandapaw's foster brothers. They're all newly-apprenticed toms. If you win one, please look in Dragonrush's bio or Pandapaw's bio. Auditions please. XD I should really stop putting up cats.
yellowpaw___________________
a color like that of egg yolk, ripe lemons, etc.; the primary color between green and orange in the visible spectrum, an effect of light with a wavelength between 570 and 590 nm
&& cream-colored tom with a brown-black smudge on his nose, brown-black ears and blue eyes && day-dreamy, romantic, sentimental, not as "manly" as his other brothers, nice, easily trusting, easily taken advantage of, very close to his brothers, associates more with Pandapaw && none paintedpaw__________________
brightly colored or multicolored; exaggerated or misrepresented
&& black and white tom with brown eyes && drama king, attention seeker, mischievous, ladies' man, can get arrogant, loyal to all of his brothers, popular, sort of a jock-type && SOPHIE fallenpaw____________________
having dropped or come down from a higher place, from an upright position, or from a higher level, degree, amount, quality, value, number, etc
&& black tom with hazel eyes && quietest of his brothers, respected, treats others with respect, rarely raises his voice, not into games (he'd rather watch from afar), hates bullies, is closest to Dragonrush && CINDER
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Post by &&R.A.V.E.N :3 on Feb 12, 2009 20:36:40 GMT -5
Your trying to kill me, Aurrie. I want Yellowkit 0.o
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Post by KURI. (happy birfday to me :D) on Feb 13, 2009 15:29:50 GMT -5
OMG Aurrie. ;0 I already have too many cats (kits especially) but I have got to try for Yellowkit. And Paintedkit is cute, too. :3
SO! If I don't have an audition up by Monday, obviously count me out.
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Post by (aurora) of the problematique on Feb 13, 2009 17:40:00 GMT -5
They're only kits for a short while ^^. The next ceremony that Fernie has is when they'll be apprentices. :]
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Post by (aurora) of the problematique on Mar 6, 2009 21:10:14 GMT -5
BUMP!
They're now apprentices :3
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Post by Cinder! no study! X_X on Mar 22, 2009 21:28:57 GMT -5
Um, heres an audition for Fallenpaw... I just do an IC post like i would on a thread? Or shall i make a bio?
The tom had dark fur, that was his more prominent feature for his eyes were soft and showed his true nature. A kind soul who was always looking, watching, seeing. You couldn't help but trace his gaze to whatever it was he seemed interested in. Fallenpaw, a shy cat--the type who would put himself in front of a bullet just to save the person it was intended for.
He was a hero type, but one that went through life unnoticed, his powerful aura pulsated with strength but a thick veil of kindness blocked it from a bullying cats view. Being kind should not be confused with being weak, Fallenpaw was living proof of that and as he looked down from his spot in a great old tree he was fond of to see one of his fellow apprentices gruffly pushing a bubbly young she-kit out of his way Fallenpaw knew it was one of those times he would earn a few respective nods after he set Nothingpaw straight but would otherwise fade into the background once more.
"Why don't you just go to the other side of the Camp!" Nothingpaw snidely commanded young... what was it, Forestkit? Whoever she was, she pressed herself against a tree behind her and hissed.
"Ive gotten out of your way! Leave me alone!" she puffed her chest out but her voice was weak. Poor young thing looked about ready to dart away from Nothingpaw and be teased by the hulking tom for the rest of her days.
A slow, grin spread wide across Nothingpaw's face, "Oh no little kit, you're still too close to me! Scram before a bad accident happens," the apprentice snarled. Nothingpaw had been a jerk ever since he became the oldest apprentice. Fallenpaw shook his head in disgust as he leaped down from his sentry post and padded over to Nothingpaw and Forestkit.
"Nothingpaw, you're far too close to me but you don't see me being mean to you, apologize to Forestkit please," he coolly ordered Nothingpaw. A chill ran down the older tom's spine as he caught sight of Fallenpaw's eyes. They had scared enough cats with their wisdom in Fallenpaw's short life. Nothingpaw snarled but walked away. Even the big old brute knew Fallenpaw and his siblings would not appreciate it if Fallenpaw was to be hurt in a little 'friendly fight.'
Forestkit looked up in awe, "Thanks Fallenpaw! You're so brave!" she seemed on the verge of declaring her absolute love for him before looking around to see if Nothingpaw was behind a bush or something and then she sprinted off toward the Nursery to go tell her mama and siblings what had just happened.
The apprentice turned away, he had a special place in his mind for bullies, it was pretty much the worse thing you could be as of Fallenpaw's way of thinking. He wasn't a tough cat but he wasn't a coward either and he knew sometimes even a mess-up like Nothingpaw had to be given some of his own medicine. Not an avenging angel-- Fallenpaw was far from some savior of the weak and distressed but he was good enough to know sometimes stepping into an uncomfortable situation such as this was for the better.
Thankfully Nothingpaw had not wanted to get in trouble today but Fallenpaw knew one day it would end. One day he would have to face a bully physically and he was not even close to ready for something like that. Fallenpaw would simply keep on helping out cats like him (shy and silent) as long as he could. Once that stopped he would deal. Fallenpaw had to.
ooc- once i get to make a bio if i win him, then he wont sound so avenging-angel, savior hero type. hell be more like a balanced cat with more to him. [/blockquote]
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Post by (aurora) of the problematique on Mar 22, 2009 22:05:27 GMT -5
Alright, you get Fallenpaw.
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Post by Cinder! no study! X_X on Mar 22, 2009 22:10:55 GMT -5
okay. Ill make his bio now!
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Post by Sophie on Mar 28, 2009 20:51:09 GMT -5
May I try for Paintedpaw? Sorry if I'm doing it wrong... Paintedpaw The sun was shining in the brilliant blue sky, bluebirds swooped and sang songs of unmatchable beauty. The light seemed to filter away into darkness as it neared Eclipseclan's boundaries. To a cat who grew up elsewhere, this might seem a dark and dismal prison. Somehow the cats of eclipseclan had grown used to the constant shade and taught themselves how to make do. The current occupants of the clan, it was all they knew. It was home. This fact couldn't be verified more clearly than by the black and white tom,named painted paw,who was sprawled outside of the apprentice den in a rare patch of weak sunshine. His eyes were shut and his muscular, but still thin body was moving up and down as if to an unheard rhythm. The young cat would have been perfectly happy resting in the sunbeam for the rest of the afternoon, however, the twisted hand of fate had other ideas. A few kits were chasing after a bird lured into Eclipseclan camp because of the unusual, but still not outstanding, amount of light that had penetrated from the outside world. The kits were making such a racket, that the tuxedo tom was awaken from his blissful slumber. "EXCUSE ME, but if I recall, it is VERY rude to wake cats who are resting from the simply backbreaking work of being an apprentice up from a incredibly rare nap. Please, go play elsewhere." With that, the apprentice heaved what he must have thought to be a tragic sigh put his black and white head on his paws and began, almost immediately, to snore. [/center]
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Post by (aurora) of the problematique on Mar 30, 2009 15:52:20 GMT -5
The tryout was good but the coding was abysmal. Can you just make it normal? No right alignment and no interrupting sentences by doing this because that is annoying.
Thanks.
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Post by Sophie on Mar 30, 2009 16:45:18 GMT -5
Alright. Sorry. It just looked short and fat when I did it the other way. I'll fix it now!
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Post by (aurora) of the problematique on Mar 31, 2009 0:28:34 GMT -5
Thanks. There's still some errors but that can be fixed easily. You get him ^^
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Post by Sophie on Mar 31, 2009 15:01:40 GMT -5
*tackle hugs.* Thank you!
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&&rhythmic
Loner
^^^^^ look up..................
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Post by &&rhythmic on Jun 25, 2009 16:12:40 GMT -5
[/size][/quote] .:Yellowpaw:.Now originally I was supposed to be paying attention when Dragonrush actually spoke to us, I was also supposed to be in the den anyway..... Right! Now where I was was more to the right of the den, between it and another.... not to bright on places right now. For the most part I was sitting in a pile of leaves I had found earlier in the morning. It clung to my cream hued fur like Velcro. My head stuck out like a sore thumb, peering into the bush to my left. A small rainbow colored butterfly hung on the edge of a leaf, twittering it's wings and antennae. It seemed weird at first, but I began to imagine the butterfly's colors swirling around me, mixing into different colors and shapes. My blue eyes widen, viewing even more colors: orange, yellow, pink, blue, purple... They just kept coming and coming, sending me into a daze or trance. I flick my head back and forth, trying to see around the colors, or to at least make sense of them. I couldn't, they were meaningless to me. Like literally, they had no meaning. I close my eyes for a minute, and then open them. I was grateful to be able to have a little bit of a solid color, but when I opened them a sudden bright light was all I could see. I blink furiously, trying to become accustomed to the light. Wasn't it just sunrise when I came out, I remember suddenly, staring at the sun as it beat down on me. Unsteadily I climb out of the pile of leaves, stretching my muscles gingerly, and grimacing at the soreness of them.
Craning my head around I look at the butterfly's colors once more and finally totter back to the den, just then thinking about how much trouble I may be in...... Oops. The scent of fresh-kill and felines roll towards me, pummeling my nose and bombarding my scents. All around me cats are moving around, doing chores, and eating. My stomach growls and I flinch at the sound, but no one appears to have noticed that I left. Maybe they aren't awake yet, I think and tip toe into the Nursery. The den is dark, no one seems to be awake, except for Pandapaw. I creep around some of the females and kits and lie down next to Fallenkit, my brother. Personally I would rather be next to Pandapaw, but then again he might tell on me to Dragonrush and I wasn't feeling up to being yelled at.
Fallenkit stirred as my fur brushed against his, but I ignored it, acting as if I had just woken up. "Morning Pandapaw." I fake a yawn and sit up. He doesn't respond so I just sigh. Maybe he was feeling down today. That made me feel down just thinking about him sad, because really I spent most of my time around him. I mean I love my other brothers too and am very close with them... but really Pandapaw was always the one I felt closest to. I bring my legs under me and walk over to sit next to him, "What's wrong?" I say this quietly, but I think that DragonRush must have heard because her eyes flitted open and she gave a long yawn.
{Some time after that.... like 2 hours}
Paintedkit and Fallenkit had finally woke up and DragonRush was explaining to them that today was the day, that today we would become apprentices. I paid them no mind, sitting next to Pandakit, speaking with him, away from the others, in hushed whispers. I lean in towards him, my splotched black nose just inches from his. "Well.....erm..uh." He says hesitantly and he looks at me with tear full eyes. "You can trust me Pandakit, you know that. I'll understand." I look at him, let him see the sympathy and the understanding that lurks in my sky blue eyes. Just at that time a single tear leaks from his eye out to the fur that grows along his cheek, and then falls to the floor. "Yes.. I know." He says and sends a soft whimper out, "Well... I'm scared..... What if they come back? And beat me up or something?" He casts a look down, I could see that the tears were welling up, threatening to over flow, but he seemed to restrain them, tried to put on a strong face.
But I knew him better and leaned into him thinking, It will be okay, It will. I pressed against him reassuringly, lending him my strength, "I'll protect you." I whisper, but now I really don't know if I can, if I would be able to. But I would... because he is my friend, my brother, my comrade. Just then Dragonrush turned to us, yelling, "ARE YOU EVEN LISTENING?!!!! GET READY, SHARE TONGUES........." Both I and Pandakit flinch, but her words bring light to my eyes and I begin to lick and pad down my very fluffy and very dirty fur. After what seemed like moons later the call came, "May all those cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here beneath the Shaderock for a clan meeting!"
My heart leaps into my throat and my body begins to tingle and all of us kits began to leap into the air with joy and run out towards the Shaderock. This was it. This was the day that we became apprentices.. probably one of th best days of my life.
[status] finished [words] nine hundred and fifteen [colors] [Yellowkit]Light Yellow [Pandakit]Teal [Dragonrush]SkyBlue [notes] I had a burst of muse.. LONGEST POST EVER!!! I'm so happy. I can't promise that the individual posts will be this long, but I will try to make them as long as possible. [/blockquote][/blockquote][/blockquote]
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