Topaz gemstone.......BC

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Name: Topazfeather
Definition: Topaz - a transparent gem, the most precious type is wine-yellow in color. It also may be found in other colors, such as white, blue, brown, orange, and pink.
Gender: Tom
Age: 16 moons
Clan: Brightclan
Rank: Warrior

Looks: Topazfeather is the lighter color of a topaz gemstone, but also looks almost white. His fur is short, but very thick which he normally complains about. His coat is easily groomed and easy to take care off. His head is small, like his body but is the most handsome part of his body. His ears are thin but tall, standing a good 2 -3 inches high a top his head. His nose is pinkish and small. His eyes are a beautiful grey, like a storm cloud. His legs are short along with his body, he will probably be a small tom as he gets older. His toes and claws are small and short. He has a fairly normal length tail, not to short, not to long, just perfect. His fur has a yellowish tinge to it, so he might get yellow as he gets older, or it may get darker into a topaz color. Being young still he has a kitten look, he may still look a bit like one as he gets older. He has three wite paws, two in the back, one in the front on his left. He has some spots that are a pale white, his right ear, the tip of his tail and a spot on either side of his stomach.

Actions: Topazfeather is an extremely loyal cat. To all cats he knows he is loyal to. His clan is put first above all things, even before family and friends. He wouldn't trade his life for another clan. When he makes a friend he stays sure to always talk to them and to never let them down. He can keep secrets very well, only telling some one if told to do so. He fights for what he feels is right and says it like it is. He doesn't like to lie and often doesn't. He is easy to trust and is very gullible.

Topazfeather is very friendly, often betraying his fight instinct to talk to an enemy of a different clan. He likes to talk to almost every cat, but isn't hyper like you would think. He likes to walk to places rather then run and is quite a skilled hunter. He is sometimes compelled to be alone and will often just sit by himself to think...he likes it. Being alone gives him time with his thoughts and he enjoys the time alone. he doesn't like to be disturbed, but also won't easily anger at anyone.

Topazfeather is also very mature, he tends to understand things better then a normal warrior. He tends to make connections to many things. He is also very helpful, trying to hlp everyone so tht they have nothing to do. He doesn't "play" with others much as i said before he likes his alone time.

Past: Topazkit was born to Shadowjaw and Jadefeather in a single litter. He was the only kit born during birth, Jadefeather had put all her energy into making that strong tom cat. The kit was like no other, he was always a considerate tom cat which surprised Jadefeather. From his birth there was always that special thing about him. As he got older it was obvious that he would be just like his father, independent and helpful. He rarely went out to play with other kits, just wanting to sit in the company of his mother. He seemed mature for his age when he became an apprentice and understood much of what was going on around him.

Topazpaw was mentored by Shadeclaw, a black tom with icy blue eyes and a bad temper. Shadeclaw pushed Topazpaw to be the best of the apprentices. He was forced up earlier, to fall asleep later, he was dead on his feet most of the time, nightmares wrecked his sleep. Not many understood his stress. and the one that did didn't care for him at all. Later on after moons of training, he collapsed during training with another apprentice. Shadeclaw got angry and started to yell and beat on Topazpaw. The other mentor tried to stop Shadeclaw, but then Shadeclaw leaped at him. The two wrestled along the ground until the clan came running toward the commotion. Shadeclaw was found out, Topazpaw finally told the whole story to his leader and Shadeclaw was exiled. For his bravery he was made a warrior and tries his hardest.


In his warriorship he has been fighting hard for his clan and so far feels that he is doing well. But his past still haunts him....

Relationships/Kin:
Shadowjaw-Father-deceased
Jadefeather-Mother-deceased
Opalpaw-half-Sister
Quartzkit-half-Sister
Shadeclaw-Mentor

Other: Themesong; Independence Day - Martina McBride
Codewords: Painting Portaits of Ghosts

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I tidied the whole thing up a bit, made the headings bold, put spaces where necessary, etc. Just watch for messiness. ^^ Other than that it's a fairly good biography, but could you add more to the description? The personality's very good, though.

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oh yeah i forgot I wanted to add more........ goes to fix]

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Accepted.

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