Post by blair on Mar 7, 2008 21:57:03 GMT -5
name
Cometpaw
kom-it
definition
noun astronomy; a celestial body moving about the sun, usually in a highly eccentric orbit, consisting of a central mass surrounded by an envelope of dust and gas that may form a tail that streams away from the sun.
from; www.dictionary.com
gender
She-cat
age
6 moons
clan
CloudClan
rank
Apprentice, Medicine cat
looks
Even in the nursery, this little she-cat made toms hearts flutter. Her complexion is quite lovely, that used to and still may make some she-cats jealous, with feathers of light brown carefully crafted onto her chest, stomach, and on her tail. The main colors of her are made up of different shades of grays, usually darker gray stripes overlapping light gray, through out her face and the areas around her muzzle and optics is almost a brown, reddish color of a fox, to a snowy, almost white very light brown. Her almost transparent, white whiskers are longer than the average she-cats, and never curling, making her appearance look striking and always drawing attention from the elegant feathers on her bod to her face immediately. Her tail is really something, it's almost ashen black with the detailing of the light brown feathers, and it curls magnificently unlike most she-cats with the light, thin tails before you dance upon her eyes and fall in love with the soft, soft amber coated with leafy green just around her pupils, which usually remain in a thin slit, no matter her mood. Her body frame on the average is the size, when full grown, of an average she-cat, though one could easily say she is a little bit on the petite side. Like all cats, she has noticeable muscles though hers are not as [when full grown, of course] adapted and strong as a warrior whom battle trains or fights, though her thin frame and unusually small paws, in contrary what most cats might think with her thick fur making her frame look large, a quick runner.
actions
Though most toms will, or could, gaze at her with dancing orbs for an hour Comet will only notice... well, anything for that matter, when she feels like it. Her attention is completely absorbed into whatever she is doing, though making it sometimes difficult to communicate with her thoroughly, unless of course she feels like paying attention to you, she will devote herself to one thing, forgetting most of the time, everything else around her or current emotions. During these times she almost seems emotionless, and sometimes she seems to go around a little blank-like she really isn't sure why she's here, or what she's supposed to do-blandly thinking about her life, and her purpose here. Sometimes whilst in these modes, if someone approaches her-with a problem, needing a herb, or something-she'll attack them with hissing mews before apologizing, and breaking herself down usually making herself feel worse than the cat whom she had hurt. Although many toms may try to get close to her, Comet will loyally decline with her full heart, sometimes having not even noticing them much before, and not having much friends with her declined acceptance of much cats, and her almost bubble constantly surrounding her. Although many times she may seem depressed, or mad at herself, she's just being 'Comet', in means of constantly thinking things out and finding out every possible outcome of every situation, to a smile coming from her face with the radiant joy of lives little pleasures, before seeming to go from there to being thoughtful and quiet, sometimes she feels or seems to just disappear into the background, or may stare familiarly into the distance with blurry orbs as if she'd rather be part of a daydream than the present situation.
past
Poor mommy, poor daddy... they where such loyal Cloudclan'ners, whom met each other when they where kits. My mommy looked like me, though my father had my personalty and always watched her from afar, into when they where apprentices, and she had many other tom-followers. Although they got trained together often, because my daddy Lightning'paw' wouldn't bother Tulip'paw' much like other toms, they never really warmed to each other to a fatal day hunting. My mommy and daddy where hunting with each other, as well as two other toms who almost fought each other to go along-willing to spend any silly moment to tickle this she cat into love with themselves-I never really understood that bit. Anyways, there hunt went fine, the other two toms displaying their catches to my mommy, the usual stuff, as she politely admired them. It almost seemed like even StarClan was tired of this was my as Tulipmaple, and decided a test of the fittest, or perhaps a test to show who was truly the right mate for my mommy. Back then badgers where a big problem in all clans, and one "lucky" badger was chosen to play extra special attention to my mommy, though right when my daddy pounced in defense, trying to scare the badger by performing one of the battle movements the two cats happened to learn together... well, the badger, from what my mommy told me, kind of disappeared, like a member of StarClan visiting us. The other toms? Well... they didn't even move to protect Tulipmaple, my mommy oddly, I guess they treasured their owns lives more than hers, not true love, I 'spose.
Love fell to love, and they decided to have kits... and when the precious moment came for her to have kits, the spirit of Thunderstrike appeared beside the already panicked she-cat, now frightened at the prospect of her dead mate. He died of an attack from an badger oddly enough, but chose Cometkit's name, leaving Sunkit's name chosen by Tulipmaple. Cometkit was born a strong healthy runt to the comparable 'older' sibling Sunkit, weak and expected unable to live. Dragonflydance spent the first few days in there, before supplying a few herbs to give to the hopeful mother, and for the mother to give for the still weak kit, the next time she came back was when the two little youngsters revealed their darling little orbs. Sunkit had the striking appearance of his fathers, and the elders murmured at the sight of him, guessing like a long ago cat of an unnamed clan, that he was Lightningstrike in soul, yet Sunkit in body. Cometkit had no rumor, and she actually grew quite jealous of him, so she ignored her mother, though one day something made her change her mind. A little rouge's kit was found on clan terra, so of course CloudClan took her in, dubbing her Skykit. She was actually found as a six moons, and spent one more moon in the nursery though, as she had bumped her head and Dragonflydance had to help her regain some memory...
My first hello to death... during that time, Dragonflydance did extremely well recovering her memory, and Skypaw was a quick learning apprentice to her mentor, but Cometkit and Sunkit where barely three and a half moons. Suddenly, right when Sunkit was on the road to healing, or becoming as strong as Cometkit, she took downward plunge, she almost became as weak as when she was born, and Dragonflydance seemed to be in there everyday, giving herbs to the poor kit and what not, as Cometkit surprising sat still and watched, almost in awe of the shecat. Eventually, her brother died, after Thunderstrike promised Tulipmaple he'd watch over the poor kit in StarClan, and Cometkit now four moons old became kind of quiet and thoughtful, and once her mother asked her what she was doing, she hissed in reply "I'm trying to bring Sunkit back" but her mother replied thoughtfully, "Dragonflydance couldn't save him, no one can" and really then is when Cometkit decided she'd like to have kits siblings die no more, really.
Alone in the world... Cometkit was weaned now, at around five moons, and Skypaw was now a warrior, Skysteps. Everyone was extremely displeased that she had become a warrior so quickly, a rouge kit, but had to admit she was excelling at hunting and fighting, and a pleasing asset to the clan. Though where her heart lay was always fishy, and she was seen talking to kittypets, rouges, and being petted by twolegs all the time, and became extremely unsocial to all clancats. Eventually, she just disappeared, but it's rumored she adopted one of the tom kittypets as her mate... when her mother heard this, it was almost said she loved Skysteps more than the five and a half moon Cometkit, and disappeared a bit mysteriously, and many rumors swirled around saying she killed herself plunging into a river, or followed Skysteps into the kittypet life, but it is unknown.
All that was left is me, I'm here to create my own destiny
in character
Not needed
relationships/kin
Mother dearest Tulipmaple [unknown]
Father dearest Lightningstrike [murdered]
Brother forever Sunkit [dead]
Adopted sister Skysteps [kittypet]
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Life mentor Dragonflydance [cloudclan]
other
comet's pictures
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And... She's got a bit of a mini-plot planned around her. Not much though, but sort of interesting.
codewords
Poison Tears Crash Down
on me...
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