&&rhythmic
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Post by &&rhythmic on Nov 9, 2008 13:30:42 GMT -5
Name: Soulspeaker
Definition: Soul - the immaterial part of a person; the actuating cause of an individual life.
Speaker - someone who expresses in language; someone who talks.
Gender: She-cat
Age: 17 moons
Clan: Serenity
Rank: Warrior
Looks:
Soulspeaker is a beautiful Tortoiseshell she-cat. Her fur is of medium length and not very thick, but not so thin either, more in between the two. She has patches of brown everywhere across her body and is a primarily black cat. Her legs are long and slender, in proportion to her smaller framed body. Her toes and claws are proportional to her legs, small and able. Her claws are long, but curved and sharp, kind of like a hook, but less curve.
Her head is circular and a tad to small for her body. the right side of her face is a sandy blonde, while the other side is black with a few blonde hairs. Her eyes are a pale green yellow with flecks of orange, red and forest green near the pupil. Her ears are the right size for her head. (finally) She has three blonde paws and one black one. Her tail is long, too long for her body.
Actions:
Soulspeaker is completely quiet. She rarely ever speaks and when she does you might want to pay attention. She doesn't like beeing around many cats, crowds tend to frighten her more then being alone. She finds it hard to make friends, because of growing up secluded from others. She isn't a scardy cat, she is just very very shy. She also finds it hard to connect with many cats because of how quiet she is. Though she is quiet she is extremely loyal to all of her friends and elders. Though for her it is hard to trust anyone.
Above all in battle she is at her fiercest, she always trys to do what's right and follows her heart in many situations, most of the time going with her gut instinct. She is a skilled hunter, trying to catch all the prey she can, especially in leaf-bare. She is kind and sweet and gentle, she loves kits and the young cats, especially the aprentices becaus they remind her so much of herself.
Past:
Soulkit grew up in a litter of three to a calico she-cat, Dreamsong and a Tortoiseshell tom, Soulstep. Before she was born her father died of whitecough in mid leaf-bare. Many cats tried to comfort Dreamsong, but she was reluctant to accept his death. When her litter had been born she shielded them from the outside world, no cats were allowed near accept the clan leader of course. Soulkit was named after her father because she was the only one who took after her father's coloring. Her mother would always tell them stories of how galant and brave he was, and some how from those stories, Soulkit could imagine her father and dreamed of him almost every night she heard a story about him. When they were six moons old Deamsong allowed them to become apprentices. Her brother and sister, Daykit and Reedkit, were made apprentices at the same time as she.
Her mentor was Sagefire. In the middle of her apprenticeship she fell into a hole with three sharp sticks in it. Her back left leg landed on one of them, it went half way through her leg. For three days she went without food in that hole before a rescue party found her. They took her back to the camp and she was taken to the Medicine cat den. It took her four moons to recover and throughout the rest of her apprenticeship her leg was stiff, but moveable. When she recieved her warrior name, Soulspeaker, it was like all of her dreams were coming true, but sadly she realized that one would never come true: to meet Soulstep. She hoped that she was becoming the cat her father wanted her to be. Often on nights as a guard she would look up at silverpelt and wonder if he was looking down on her. Every now and then her leg gives her problems.
Relationships/Kin:
DreamSong-Mother-Deceased-broken heart
Soulstep-Father-Deceased-Whitecough
Daypelt-Sister-deaceased-Cause unknown
Reedspirit-Brother-deceased-Cause unknown
Sagefire-Mentor-deceased-Old age
Other:
Codewords: painting portraits of ghosts
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Post by (aurora) of the problematique on Nov 9, 2008 14:35:31 GMT -5
Please finish this soon. Unfinished biographies aren't supposed to be on the sign-up board. Thanks ^^
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&&rhythmic
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^^^^^ look up..................
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Post by &&rhythmic on Nov 9, 2008 17:03:18 GMT -5
I am finished with it
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Post by SHADE. :D on Nov 10, 2008 10:48:03 GMT -5
Could you seperate the different sections, please?
Like...
Description: yadda yadda yadda...
Personality: ....
History: etc.
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&&rhythmic
Loner
^^^^^ look up..................
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Post by &&rhythmic on Nov 10, 2008 11:01:04 GMT -5
yesh i will
Updated
I fixed it
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Post by SHADE. :D on Nov 10, 2008 11:23:16 GMT -5
Accepted.
I tidied up the top of the bio a bit, but other than that, it was fine. ^^ |
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