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Post by Ice on Nov 4, 2008 19:50:52 GMT -5
Name: Wisteriakit
Definition: a climbing vine that sprout flowers in bunches like grapes
Gender: Male
Age: not born yet?
Clan: Eclipseclan
Rank: Kit
Looks: Wisteriakit is a amber tabby tom. He has just a little bigger ears then normal. It doesn't look like it until you look closely. Around his eyes he has white lining , that makes his cyan eyes stand out a lot. Also he has white covering the same area as his whiskers, and his mouth. He has an orangeish-redish color tint to his nose that nakes it stand out away from his pelt. Wisteriakit's body is leith, but he still has some kit muscle. He has a very thin shoulder width though. Making him look smaller then he can really appear to be. He is very long in length wise. He also has long legs, but they are an ok length for a kit. They are just like his ears. You can bearly tell that his legs are just a little bit longer then normal kits. He has normaly sharp claws, and his paws fit the size of his legs.
Actions: Wisteriakit is very quick-witted, making him a good fighter, and a fast learner. He is very fast at everything. He loves to run, which helps him improve in his speed. Also he trys to be as loyal as he can, but sometimes even the loyalist cat can betray their clan. Wisteriakit is also wise. He is one of the few kits who isn't in the training for just the battle fighting or hunting. He is more into improving his skills, and learning how to make then better. He is also very dreamy, kits love to playt around with him. Some of the fae kits also flirt with him while they are playing with him. He is a very easy person to hang out with because he trys to be so indepentent. Wisteriakit is very protective of himself, and his family members. He will rip off any cats head if they even say one mean word to his family members. He is like one of the protecters of the family.
Past: Before Rippedear and Phantomthief found out they loved eachother, Rippedear was a love-sick female that wished her sister alive. While Phantomthief hated everything in sight because that was how his neglecting mother raised him. He hated his sister and she hated any tabby cats, so how do you say these 2 fell in love when one wouldn't look at a female and the other wouldn't look at a silver tabby. It happened when Fernpelt sent Rippedear, Phantomthief, Hickorypaw, and Glacierstripe on a hunting patrol together to gather as much prey as possible for the up coming leaf-bare. When the two looked at eachother they new at once, but it took a couple days to reach their hearts to tell eachother.
One night Phantomthief was getting fresh kill and Rippedear found him alone, she knew it was time to tell him, but her mind caught her short when they started talking about her old mate that left her for a CloudClanner and then died. Then when he asked her if she wanted to be his mate her heart and mind stopped for a second and her soul answered for her. She said yes. So a couple moons before the big Snowstorm she had(in order) Umberkit then Hoaxkit then both Galekit and Wisteriakit.
Relationships/Kin: mother Rippedear father Phantomthief brother Umberkit sister Hoaxkit Galekit cousins Windpool[deceased], Cloudcry[deceased], Mudbelly[deceased] aunts(all dead) -- Rogueclaw, Soulmistake, Fireclaw, Mirror, Rose uncles Windclaw, Tigerfur[deceased], Blood[deceased] grandmother -- Saffronedge[deceased] grandfather -- Tallstar[deceased]
Other: is close with Hoaxkit, twin of Galekit
Codewords: Painting portraits of Ghosts
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Post by (aurora) of the problematique on Nov 4, 2008 20:57:42 GMT -5
Could you separate the individual areas more so that it doesn't look all run-together?
Like this: Name: Wisteriakit
Definition: a climbing vine that sprout flowers in bunches like grapes
Gender: Male
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Post by Ice on Nov 8, 2008 3:06:31 GMT -5
There is that better?
Tell me if there is anything else that needs to be changed and i will be happy to change it ^^
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Post by SHADE. :D on Nov 8, 2008 8:07:01 GMT -5
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