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Post by faust on Oct 17, 2008 19:42:54 GMT -5
the seconds are winding down.
x that's fogpaw to you.
x the boyish charm.
x 12 moons.
x brightclan.
x apprentice.
baby don't waste my time.
let us start with the basics, shall we?
to begin to describe, eye-catching, rugged, an interesting specimen to lay eyes upon. he's a drawer of your attention, a distraction to the unaware, and maybe a tad vain. to start us off, something simple. pelt is a varying mixture of hues, and colors. though at first this is hard to see. one must focus to get the full force of fog. he lives up to his name with a smoky painted fur color. the dominating part that is, because in the blend is the soft likes of a mild alabaster. also including streaks of daring ebony and even darker stripes of a silver tint. the lines wrapping in a slithering formation around the young tom's legs to form small bands of the shade.
attentive ears seem overly large for the sharp head of the apprentice. the thing upon his shoulders well cut and of a decent shape, his ears stick out from this to form pointed towers. In between these is a light stripe running in a straight order over the top of his skull. facial appearance is a formidable sight. lips are always twitching upwards in an enticing, welcoming grin. eyes are a dazzling visual of an almost slated grey that matches his coat, but distorted by an offset of blue. around the location of his eyes is other tattoo like markings that agree quite well with him.
build is lithe and slender, an elegant motion about him strutted by his undeniable swagger that gives an insight to his personality. shoulders are well broadened, natural way for his youth and the tom enjoys keeping a fit, masculine figure. for the ladies entertainment of course. tail is a prided possession about fog as it is always moving, displying his mood with it's awkward movements. one can always tell how fog is feeling by the motions of his tail.
'cause that's all you're gonna get.
to go into depth.
easy now, easy now. fog is not a gentle fellow, not at all. devious a keyword, a descriptive lettering. wily is the turmoil of his mind. easygoing attitude is only a coverup to mischievous misfortunes. ever crafty is he of the name fog. never to live down such a reputation! cats are always peeking over their shoulders when the tom is around. making sure that they will not be the latest victim of the trouble making miscreant. he's never one to turn down such an oppourtunity.
most always you will find fog in a chipper, bring-your-heart up mood. he's a dashing one, one for the ladies. vanity does tend to strike in these type of circumstances. the youth is a bragging one. one to showoff and amuse, he thrives off attention. overall this however, the higher will most often never have a problem when telling fog his task. he'll listen if he thinks it right and true. always wary of corrupt schemings, he will always study every angle of what is asked of him.
although he may come off as full of himself and shallow. trying to impress the she-cats and such. he would never hesitate at a shot of something that might run out for the better good. loyal to whomever claims him as their's, and whomever he claims as his. one would do well to stay away from loved ones and those close to him if they mean harm, for in every being there is always a side. a side that would set them off, anger is never too far away when the cause is just.
you can never make me care,
with such a beginning.
This story begins with Ravenpelt, a young IceClan warrior, complaining to Ivoryclaw, a well-respected FrostClan senior warrior, that Ivoryclaw has not told him that Dawnwood, daughter of IceClan deputy Boarhorn, and Owlstar, leader of FrostClan, were mates. Ravenpelt was upset because he loved Dawnwood. Ivoryclaw was upset with Owlstar for making his younger brother Carnelianpath deputy over him, his argument being that Carnelianpath is inexperienced compared to him of an older litter. Ivoryclaw convinced Ravenpelt to tell Boarhorn about this, and, after Ravenpelt had run back to his camp, Ivoryclaw mentioned to himself that he had heard rumors that Owlstar had an affair with his mate Elegantflame. Later, Ivoryclaw told Owlstar that he overheard Ravenpelt telling Boarhorn about their secret and that he was furious about this, a blatant lie.
News arrived that rogues were coming to the Snow Forest in the Gathering. Boarhorn showed up and, in front of every other cat, accused Owlstar of seducing his daughter. Owlstar defended himself, explaining that it was Dawnwood who started the affair, saying that she had become enamored with him because of his bravery. (Unlike other Clans, IceClan, FrostClan, SnowClan, and HailClan form one unit--GlacierClan--and do not follow the rule to not have cross-Clan relationships and Clanners are free to walk on each other's territory.) However, talk soon turned to war, and after a few moons of battle, the Clans beat back the rogues. All broke out in celebration.
Ivoryclaw, who resented Owlstar for favoring Carnelianpath, took the opportunity of Owlstar's absense to instigate issues. At the next Gathering, he persuaded Ravenpelt to engage Carnelianpath in a fight after drugging the deputy's food with poppy and catmint. When Owlstar saw Carnelianpath brawling under the influence, he stripped the tom of his rank and gave it to Ivoryclaw. After Carnelianpath sobered up, Ivoryclaw persuaded him to have Dawnwood act as a mediator between himself and Owlstar, hoping that she will persuade the tom to reinstate Carnelianpath (so to make Ivoryclaw look forgiving and kind).
Ivoryclaw then persuaded Owlstar to be suspicious of the pregnant Dawnwood and Carnelianpath. As it happened, Carnelianpath was courting a HailClan she-cat named Bluestream. Dawnwood dropped a bluejay feather knotted in her fur that was Owlstar's first gift to her. Elegantflame stole this for Ivoryclaw, who planted it in Carnelianpath's bed as evidence of Carnelianpath's and Dawnwood's affair, but Elegantflame did not know about this. Ivoryclaw told Owlstar to wait outside the warriors den while he then interrogated Carnelianpath about the feather, goading him to talk about his affair with Bluestream. However, Owlstar only heard part of the conversation, thinking that Carnelianpath is talking about Dawnwood. Bluestream discovered the feather issue and chastised Carnelianpath. Enraged, Owlstar decided to kill his mate and ordered Ivoryclaw to kill Carnelianpath after the two have a long talk. It was revealed that Owlstar doesn't really love Dawnwood; he's actually in love with Ivoryclaw. The tom was speechless at the revelation but he said he cannot accept Owlstar's affections.
Ivoryclaw convinced Ravenpelt to kill Carnelianpath in his stead. Ravenpelt attacked the deputy as he came home from seeing Bluestream, and they fought. Ivoryclaw and a patrol arrived. He pretended to help Carnelianpath, slitting Ravenpelt's throat to stop him from talking and then he accused Bluestream of conspiracy. The she-cat fled with her sister Mintcloud to ask Owlstar for help.
During this ordeal, Owlstar confronted the new mother Dawnwood in the nursery and killed her just as Elegantflame arrived. When Ivoryclaw's mate distressed about this, Owlstar explained himself, justifying his actions by accusing Dawnwood of adultery. Elegantflame called for help, in which Ivoryclaw, Boarhorn, and some other warriors arrive. Elegantflame explained the situation. When Owlstar mentioned the feather, Elegantflame realized what Ivoryclaw has done; she exposed him and then he killed her. Owlstar, realizing Dawnwood's innocence, attacked Ivoryclaw but because of his love for him, did not kill him. Carnelianpath arrived, wounded from the fight with Ravenpelt but mostly okay, and apprehended both Ivoryclaw and Owlstar with the help of the Clan, but Owlstar escaped and grabbed Dawnwood's corpse, throwing himself off a nearby cliff in suicide.
It is assumed that Ivoryclaw was executed for his treachery but we do not know, as the story switched to Bluestream and Mintcloud's point of view. They made their way into the nursery, as everyone had seemed to forgotten about the kits in there. Together, they made their escape to a new Forest after weeks of traveling, where they met up with a new Clan. Unused to the rule of territories, they strode into BrightClan with no regard and were immediately taken in for questioning by a patrol. Bluestream and Mintcloud told Ghostlystar about their experiences, and that they wished to escape their old homes by fostering these four kits. Ghostlystar accepted them as queens, and they raised Venomkit, Butterflykit, Floodkit, and Fogkit as their own. The sisters were good parents, raising them to apprentices.
Fogpaw fairs well in Brightclan, becoming a senior apprentice now and awaiting his ceremony. The honor of becoming a Warrior and being able to protect his clan from threats or any harm that might be done to it. Still up to his old games and tricks, living this life is all he is wanting of.
for you. xx.
{} dawnwood
{} owlstar
{} butterflypaw
{} floodpaw
{} venowpaw
watch me while i paint
portraits of haunting ghosts,
so horrifying to the eyes.
these nightmares will never
let you go.
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Post by (aurora) of the problematique on Oct 17, 2008 19:58:56 GMT -5
Accepted but he's about 12 moons, right about now, since he'll be a warrior. Just make up some warrior name for his mentor ^^;
Do you have a warrior name or do you want me to just randomly pick something?
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Post by faust on Oct 17, 2008 20:01:20 GMT -5
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Post by SHADE. :D on Oct 18, 2008 8:30:37 GMT -5
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