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Post by SHADE. :D on Oct 14, 2008 10:08:30 GMT -5
Okay. ^^
I'm planning on killing off Secretcalling soon. He's gradually going mad because of Wovenknot not letting him see her kits. So, I was planning on him doing something really bad, like kill someone, force-matesomeone, etc, etc. I need help with the crime, because it can't just be with some random cat. The cats that could be involved are; Wovenknot, Cardinalspire [if he lives that long], Dovefeathers, Limestone, Avenstail, Claryfeather, Maplepool, Sablekit, Valleykit and Honeykit. Obviously the cats that aren't acted by me will have to be confirmed by their actors. So, any idea's? I'd like as many cat's as possible involved. ^^
And then, afterwards, I'd like Secreters to die. It can either be an accident, like a rock falling on because StarClan's angry with him or whatever, or he could kill himself out of guilt, or someone could murder him. If so, who?
I need help here because I can't plan something without permission from Aurrie, Fernie, Jolly, Fireh, Kuri and Spice, who act some of the family. And I think it'll turn out better if we all contribute! =D
Thanks!
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Post by (aurora) of the problematique on Oct 14, 2008 11:53:50 GMT -5
My idea is kinda dumb since you RP both Secret and Woveners but if you had them physically fight and then he runs off to commit suicide after realizing all the pain he's put her through. I don't know -__-; My muse just swallowed itself up
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Post by KURI. (happy birfday to me :D) on Oct 14, 2008 13:57:28 GMT -5
I think it would be fun to do something with Valleykit, Honeykit and Sablekit. Valleykit has already taken a liking to Secretcalling, so it could be a sort of clash between him, Wovenknot and Valleykit. Maybe Honeykit is afraid of Secretcalling so he gets angry at Wovenknot for making her hate him...? I don't know, but it could be something along the lines of that.
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Post by x.Jolly.x on Oct 14, 2008 14:20:29 GMT -5
I'm fine with Dovefeathers being a part of it. She can be trying to protect Wovenknot or something.
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Post by MIMPPHI. \\ on Oct 14, 2008 22:54:42 GMT -5
If you want he can force mate on Sapphireheart, she's vulnerable at the moment and sad from her loss of her mate but that's only if you want to. Just throwing out the option
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Post by SHADE. :D on Oct 15, 2008 9:38:43 GMT -5
I dunno about him doing that, because she's not really involved, so it would be a bit... Random. =/
Yeah, I think having Honeykit, Sablekit and Valleykit deeply involved would be good. But he has to do something pretty bad to kill himself out of guilt. How about he starts trying to convince the clan that Wovenknot is mad? And they start to believe him, and start losing faith that Wovenknot is telling the truth about Secretcalling ever attacking her. And then there could be the rest of the plot... And at the end, after the middle of the plot [which we have yet to think of], Secretcalling could attack Wovenknot and the whole clan could see.
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Post by KURI. (happy birfday to me :D) on Oct 15, 2008 12:17:52 GMT -5
Okay, let's see what the ol' Delusion Machine (aka my brainz) can think up. This is only an idea, though.
Alright, so Wovenknot is refusing to let Secretcalling speak to her kits. Honeykit and Sablekit are fine with it, but Valleykit is determined not to listen and she ends up spending a lot of time with Secretcalling. Wovenknot is angry, of course, but more at Secretcalling than Valleykit even though Secretcalling doesn't think he's doing anything wrong. He starts calling Wovenknot mad and after she yells at Secretcalling for 'tainting / harming / speaking to her children' the Clan starts to believe Secretcalling because they don't see why Wovenknot would accuse him of that. Only a few cats still have faith in Wovenknot, and those are her close friends, eg. Dovefeathers and Cardinalspire. Sablekit and Honeykit support their mother (unless their actors want differently) while Valleykit still feels a certian loyalty to Secretcalling. Honeykit is afraid of Secretcalling because Wovenknot had finally told the kits about how he attacked her, but Valleykit yells at both her mother and her sister because she thinks that Secretcalling is a fine cat. This stuff goes on for a few moons until Secretcalling and Wovenknot meet in the woods and Secretcalling attacks her again. Valleykit (now Valleypaw / Valleysong) and her siblings are watching as he wounds Wovenknot deeply. Sablekit and Honeykit go back to the Clan to tell everyone but Secretcalling gets to Valleykit, telling her that her mother had attacked him first. Valleykit finally snaps and declares madness on all of her family, staying very close to Secretcalling for the next moon as the story is sorted out. Secretcalling finally kills himself or is killed by someone else. Actually, having Valleykit / Sablekit kill him would be fun, but it would also be random and out-of-character for them... anyway, that could be sorted out after.
That was a lot of writing. It really involves Valleykit because I haven't seen the other two's relationship with Secretcalling yet.
... and I really like Valleyers. *hugs*
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Post by SHADE. :D on Oct 15, 2008 12:27:18 GMT -5
I like that idea...
And Sablekit would kill Secretcalling. If he was ngry enough. xD
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Post by KURI. (happy birfday to me :D) on Oct 15, 2008 12:31:16 GMT -5
He could get into a fight with someone about Secretcalling, find him and KILL HIMZ. x.o If that's what you wanted, o'course.
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Post by SHADE. :D on Oct 15, 2008 12:34:53 GMT -5
Or maybe he could just gey really angry and convince himself that it's Secretcalling's fault that Valleykit left...
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Post by FIREH!! on Oct 15, 2008 19:17:06 GMT -5
I think he should force mate with someone, then Limestone kill him out of rage. And I will act Limestone. xD
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Post by SHADE. :D on Oct 16, 2008 9:47:31 GMT -5
That could work.. But who would he force mate...?
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Post by (aurora) of the problematique on Oct 16, 2008 12:26:02 GMT -5
Wovenknot~! LOL JK
Um... *scratches chin* Perhaps he could force himself on Limestone, who kills him in self-defense?
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Post by SHADE. :D on Oct 16, 2008 12:28:17 GMT -5
Mebbe...
But it wouldn't be quite as dramatic.. But everyone else involved [including Woveners] is his relative. =/ Dunno...
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Post by KURI. (happy birfday to me :D) on Oct 16, 2008 13:23:19 GMT -5
LMAO LETS HAVE HIM FORCE MATE HONEYKIT / VALLEYKIT.
for the lulz.
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Post by (aurora) of the problematique on Oct 16, 2008 13:35:17 GMT -5
I was thinking about that, having Secret be a pedophile
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Post by [xoxo] shard. :) on Oct 16, 2008 14:51:56 GMT -5
Ooh, ooh! Pick me, pick me! -flails-
No new ideas. ._.;; But if you want him to force mate a random cat that's not in his family, I have Raindrop. But she's supposed to die very soon, so maybe not. But Heatherpaw is open! x3 If her and Gecko are together by then, he could be all like, WTF RAWR. xDDD [/blockquote]
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Post by SHADE. :D on Oct 17, 2008 9:31:25 GMT -5
Secretcalling wouldn't do that to a random cat... =/ And I don't think he's might mean enough to do it to Honey or Valley.
Maybe he could befriend someone, get close to them, then think he's in love with them [when it's actually just imfatuation] whilst all the him saying Woveners is mad stuff is going on, then force mate them when they say they don't love him...? They don't necessarily have to have kits of his afterwards...
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Post by KURI. (happy birfday to me :D) on Oct 17, 2008 13:55:12 GMT -5
I was joking about Honeykit / Valleykit.
It would disturb me if he did. ;;
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Post by FIREH!! on Oct 17, 2008 19:05:32 GMT -5
HE COULD FORCEMATE FIRESTAR OMG!!!!!!!!!
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Post by (aurora) of the problematique on Oct 17, 2008 20:11:10 GMT -5
By StarClan, she might have a valid point...
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Post by SHADE. :D on Oct 18, 2008 8:25:37 GMT -5
Firestar...?
But she wouldn't have kits. Right...? Because she'd be dying like, right afterwards... =/
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Post by KURI. (happy birfday to me :D) on Oct 18, 2008 12:40:35 GMT -5
Don't mean to sound rude, but what's with the sudden obsession with Secretcalling force-mating someone? :\
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Post by FIREH!! on Oct 18, 2008 14:24:07 GMT -5
Haha that would be funny. And Firestar's going to die soon, just not, like, super soon, because of all the deaths of the leaders lately. I don't want it to seem like all the leaders are dying in the same timeframe. So she's going to die after Ghostlystar dies, maybe a month later.
So she could have kits, but give them to another queen to nurse, because she couldn't. Mwahahahahahaa.
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Post by SHADE. :D on Oct 19, 2008 5:22:26 GMT -5
Okay, I don't really want him to do that, I've decided. I don't want him to have more kits. ^^
So... He tells the clan Wovenknot is mad, and leads Valleykit away from her family. Now we just need the big, big crime he does. But I don't want him to force-mate someone. It would be a bit stupid, considering Cyanfeather was in MoonClan too.
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Post by KURI. (happy birfday to me :D) on Oct 19, 2008 8:11:32 GMT -5
Well, he could try to kill some cat or come close to it (even if he just bit them on the neck, not meaning to kill them but still killing them or wounding them severely) but then he gets caught by some other cat. I don't know. ^^;
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Post by SHADE. :D on Oct 20, 2008 9:30:37 GMT -5
Okay. How about...
Wovenknot keeps annoying Secretcalling by not letting him see her kits. He's already p'ed about Avenstail leaving MoonClan. Eventually he cracks, and starts telling the clan that Wovenknot is mad and that she is making everything up, about what he did to her when she was a kit. But he says it in a sad, sympathetic way, to make more people believe him. Sablekit and Honeykit [no idea how old they'll be by then] don't believe him, but Valleykit kind of does.
Ages later, when the whole clan thinks Wovenknot is a mad freak, she says something really offensive to him and he attacks her in front of the whole clan. Firestar banishes him. Valleykit goes with him. Wovenknot is devestated that her daughter chose Secretcalling over her.. A while later, Honeykit and Sablekit go to look for their sister. They find Secretcalling. By then he is completely mad. He attacks them and fatally injures them both [if Spice doesn't mind]. Valleykit see's, and finally realises what a meanie he is. She get's help and all three siblings go back to camp. Sablekit will be okay, but it's Spice choice what happens to Honeykit.
Secretcalling changes his name. He tries to stay away from MoonClan [he feels super gulty] but one night he goes to see Limestone. They get into a big fight and Limestone shoves him. He falls and breaks his neck, or something like that.
What d'you guys think?
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Post by KURI. (happy birfday to me :D) on Oct 21, 2008 16:37:49 GMT -5
=D I love it.
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Post by SHADE. :D on Oct 22, 2008 9:30:00 GMT -5
Fwee! :3
What about the rest of you?
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Post by FIREH!! on Oct 22, 2008 14:51:00 GMT -5
That'd be awesome!! Maybe Wovenknot can forgive Limestone afterwards? Then Limestone can die happily? Not that she'll die soon. Or will she??? -taps fingers- Mwahahaahaahaaaaa...
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