Constructive Criticism

[Wolf]

Hehehe, what do you think of me, Aurrie? ;D Be honest (Although I know you will be, so I didn't really need to tell you to XD)

[idk my bff brindle]

Okay Aurrie, lemme have it. What do you think of me?

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[(aurora) of the problematique]

<sub>Wolf, you need to post more in your posts. You've been getting better but sometimes I find myself scraping a reply from nothing because I have barely anything to go on in your posts. Other than that, you're pretty good. :3

Brindle, lulz, I honestly have nothing to say. You just returned but you came back with a bang. Good bios, good posts, good job. :]</sub>

[Wolf]

Lol you mean that you don't know what to make your character say/do because of my posts sometimes? I get that with other people sometimes, I'll post, they'll reply, and then I'm like 'Um..ok, but what do I do now?' XD Is that what you mean?
Wow, it's nice that you think I'm pretty good though ;D

[(aurora) of the problematique]

<sub>Yeah, that's what I mean. XD It's hard to reply to your posts because there's little to go off of.

Keep working hard and you'll get better. :3</sub>

[SHADE. :D]

SHADE ))

B R C.

All I really have to say is WOW. I can't believe this site has come so far. xDD I remember when I was a n00by little newcomer to roleplaying on Neopets, believe it or not. xDD That's where I met Razor and Feather, my very first RPing buddies. They made Darkened Forest and I joined. After that went inactive, I thought, what the hell, I'll make my own site! So along came BRC v1. It went pretty well, though we had no plot, and no real point or purpose... After that came v2, then finally my darling, v3. This has gone the BEST by far. I can't believe how much better I've become. I can't believe I'm an admin of a site that's got so much bigger. So, like I said. WOW. xD

S T A F F.

Ah, the admins! The people who help me out with all the technical stuff. xD Let me just remember you all, nothing said here is meant ultra-meanly. Most of my problems with you have poofled into nothing or been ironed out anyway. xD So, no worries!

A U R R I E <33

Aurrie. Aurrie! <3 I don't remember much about v3 without you. But I remember you first joining... I thought yes! a new member who can actually roleplay! That wasn't a dig to anyone here, by the way. All of you guys can roleplay. <33 Anyway. I didn't really know you so well. Then with all the Widowmaker thing... I started to feel a bit.. Wrongfooted. xDD A new member asking to be part of the major plot? But then I realised that you were good for the plot. Only other problems I've had are pretty much the same as everyone else's. Sometimes I felt left out, kinda like you were the creator and I was the co admin. I guess it was just because you noticed things I didn't, a sorted them out. I know that now. I don't feel undermined by you at all anymore. <3 Oh yeah, I remember another thing that did bug me! Bio's. Sometimes it seemed like smaller bio's, if they were for BC, were accepted by you more than for other clans... But now that I think about it, that sound's nothing like you. Maybe I imagined it. :3

And as for what you think of me, I agree. I've never liked upsetting people. I'm always the one to sort out a fight. xD I guess I'll never change. But I'll try and toughen up, for you, Aurrie.

F I R E H <33

I have known you for so long! I met you on v1. Remember? Remember at the end, when only you, Feather and I even visited the site? Cool, wasn't it? xDD You've been such a good friend to me for aaaages. I don't think BRC would be the same without you. I don't really have anything that bugs me about you... Other than what the others said. Some of your characters are similar. But I never really noticed that until it was pointed out. xD Shows how great my observational skills are.

S H A R D I C U S <33

Y'know what? You've never done anything whatsoever to annoy me! *clap*

The rest of you staff.. I have nothing to say. xDDD You've never annoyed me. =]

M E M B E R S.

Members! Where would we be without you. <33 I love all you, but I do have a few issues. One of my most fierce pet-hates is INACTIVITY. Not just inactivity, but coming back after being inactive. I don't like it when people go inactive, come back, and automatically expect everything to be as it was. Did that sound ultra-mean? Oops. :3''

K E E <33

Keester! Only one thing about you has ever got me angry. Arguments! Not that I've seen you argue for months... But yes. I think it was really the whole Blue thing. I still don't know what happened there. I was away at the time. It was just kinda nasty to come back and find a huge argument, and two members [ie, you and Blue] had left because of it. But you've sorted it out. I have no current reasons to rant at you. You don't annoy me at all. xDD

C H E S H Y <33

What the others have said. Overcompensation. ^^ You've toned it down now, though, so it's all good. Oh, and I know it's disappointing losing auditions, but being ultra-upset can put other people off. =/ Just remember, there's always next time! <3

W O L F <33

I'm putting this here at your request, my darling sister. xDD Well, my only problems with you were your inactivity [sorted out now!] and illiteracy [also on the way out!] So, that's all. Oh, yeah. Try and get involved with more people on the site! Then your roleplays will get more interesting. One more thing. In fact, several. Kronk [or however you spell it], and I wonder what the future holds...? LOVE YOU<33

G U E S T S

Guests? No problems. 'Cept when they come here with the intent of ruining the site and c-box. x___x

L A Y O U T

Love it. <33 Especially with recent tweaks by Aurrie-Bear. Got a bit irritated when I got the complaints about Kuri's autumn skin... But hey. xDD

THAT'S ALL. Feel free to ask questions. <33 Love you all!

[(aurora) of the problematique]

_{The thing with Kuri's skin was that...we couldn't see the C-box! XD We had to high-light it to try and read it. How annoying. I knew guests wouldn't appreciate it.}

[SHADE. :D]

Yeah, I knew the problem. I meant I was annoyed that everyone was telling me what was wrong with it, repeatedly, rather than asking Kuri to maybe chance it. xDD

[lonelylove :D]

-noms on nails- What do you think 'bout meh, Shaders?

[Dansen[Mouse]]

I am rather curious of what you think of me also...

[(aurora) of the problematique]

_{I don't think it could be changed without changing the entire skin. *taps chin*}

[SHADE. :D]

I dunno. xD I'm not good with skins.
Okay, Lonelers and Mousey.

Lonely... The only thing that ever really annoyed me was the whole Jasminestar inactivity thing. But you sorted that out, rather than clinging to the position, which was good. ^^ Other than that, you haven't annoyed me at all.

Mouse... You've never done anything to irritate me. xD May I say that you have improved a lot since you first joined the site. Lonely, too! <3

[(aurora) of the problematique]

_{Lulz, Shade, I was bombarding her about the Jasminestar thing XD}

[&&R.A.V.E.N :3]

I'd love to hear what people have to say about me ^^

[lonelylove :D]

-winces- I was a dumb fool :3 I know if I was ever a leader again, I'd learn from my mistakes :3 And many I made :3 And thank ya, i guess i have improved <3 -huggles all around!-

[idk my bff brindle]

...Me? c:
Okay Shade, what do you think of me? :3
and lulz i already know i overuse smilies XD

[polariswind]

.x! Ickle Doujka would like to know what dear 'ol Shade thinks of her. I know I've been inactive, but other than that, I'd like to see what you really think of me. ;3

[SHADE. :D]

Uhm, Raver, Brindlers and Doujka.

Raver... I don't really have a problem with you, except perhaps that you seem to roleplay with the same people. But it's not a major thing. ^^
Brindle... I haven't got any problem's with you.
And Doujka... I haven't really known you for long enough... xD I guess the inactivity annoyed me, but other than that, you haven't irritated me. :]

[polariswind]

.x! Yes, though you know why I was inactive. I quit, but came back, but now, Lizzeh hogs the computer. |punts her|

[KURI. (happy birfday to me :D)]

What about me? :] I like people's opinions. xD

[(aurora) of the problematique]

_{I'm going to bump this since it seems like some people have some s**t they'd like to get off their chests but would rather tell other twitters than the people they're cussing out.}

[cheshy says grace]

Alright, Aurrie, you wanna know what we're saying?

Since you've come back, you've lost a lot of my respect. You've been posting, what? Three-Five liners? That Blazepaw post in the gathering? Or those posts with Jackaltooth? I've been posting better than you, and that's kind of sad. What happened to Miss I-Post-Awesomeness? You're biographies are super-duper but it seems like you're putting too much of your muse into those instead of your actual roleplaying.

And then you leave in November for the Navy. About, what, two-three weeks later you come back because it ended up backfiring because of your temper. Keep in mind that you had killed off both Ghostlystar [the BrightClan leader] and Runningcloud [the medicine cat of SerenityClan]. About a month or more after you came back you got Swampfox as deputy, and do you know how bad I wanted to go for the CloudClan deputy? So, now, you've already got a deputy, and now you're going for SerenityClan medicine cat apprentice. Obviously you aren't happy with just one new high position, so you go for [technically] one of your old positions. Did you forget that Runningcloud was medicine cat of SerenityClan or something? Aren't we supposed to give other people a chance? I'm actually back and I've been staying active to the point that this is the only roleplaying site that I can stay active on and I've lost the deputy positions as many times as Rogue had before she got Deliriumdancer or step or whatever [sorry, I can't remember and I don't feel like looking]. I worked so hard on Hauntedmask, and thanks and everything for the name. I even went through and changed everything from MoonClan [was it?] to CloudClan. But enough about me, this is about you.

What happened? And don't go blaming it on your boyfriend or whatever, because I've been through that before and it never affected my roleplaying.

By the way, Brindle, you better post your criticisms up here too or Ima come to Canada and hunt you down.

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And while I'm at it, Fireh, when the hell are you gonna kill Firestar? XD

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[Spice..xx]

Woahh man

I'mma try and not be an Aurrie groupie, cos i love the girl but Chesh, that was pretty harsh.

So she got CloudClan deputy. Everyone knows what a good roleplayer Aurrie is, and that she would do well in deputy position. Was there auddies for CC deputy? I can't seem to find any, but even if Raven did just 'choose' Aurrie, then it was for good reason. Raven is just getting her feet with the whole leader thing and Aurrie is a damn good person to ask for advice and so, also a good person to be deputy. I feel for you with the whole high positions thing, but surely CloudClan deputy is an issue to take up with Raven rather than Aurrie.

I admit to having noticed Aurrie's posts have been a little shorter, but attacking her for the ones in the Gathering? Hell, my gathering posts with Fablepaw and Liladance etc have been pretty awful, but when you have a lot of cats and all they are doing is going "Haii guys, hows your Clan?" its pretty hard to find stuff to say. There is NO WAY Aurrie is the only one in the Gathering who has posted a short post.

But I agree with you that her posts are shorter, but they are still manageable to roleplay with. I have no problems with her posts atm, but thats just me and we all have our opinions.

But the whole SC meddy cat appy auditions? Now THAT has peed me off. Kuri is not some brainless idiot who is gonna go "Ohhhs emm well i knows Aurrie ish a good roleplayer so me picks her". Why would she do that? Maybe Aurrie's audition is gonna be the best there is? Then Kuri would be perfectly in the right to pick Aurrie. Auditions are open to anyone, and if Aurrie wants to have a go at getting SC med cat appy, then why shouldn't she? Because she's had it before? What difference does that make, fine she left and came back, and thats annoying but whatever. Aurrie should get an equal chance at it, as everyone else does.

For instance, Shard has been auditioning a lot recently. She gave up her position as Stormstar. Would that mean everyone would get pissed at her if she went for another deputy position?

And Shade. She gave up as EC leader and immediately got picked as MC deputy (and Fireh had very good reasons then too, Shade's an awesome roleplayer). Firestar is going to die soon, meaning that Shade will have had 2 leaders. Not in the same Clan yes, but still 2 leaders. And yes, she's our admin, but that shouldn't make a difference. And in my opinion, if people got pissed about that, then that would be really petty.

Saying she isn't happy with one high postion is a dig at a hell of a lot of people on here. There is Me, Fernie. Kuri, Raven, Lizzeh, Rogue and probably others who I can't think of that have 2 high positions, either leader/ med cat or med cat appy or deputy/med cat or med cat appy. So, you can hardly dig at Aurrie about going for 2 when that is allowed on the site and so many of us have 2 high positions also.

As far as the whole navy/boyfriend whatever thing goes, that is NONE of our business. Maybe if there's been a problem or whatever Aurrie should have posted in the absent board saying she might be a bit museless or whatever this whole thing is having a dig at, but all of this is real life and you know what, none of us can do anything about Aurrie's real life. It her life, so its her business.

And so I'm getting my opinions out, I must admit I was really pissed that so many of my cats had lost mates/kits/siblings or whatever (like Dark x Saint, Dew x Ollie and Clear x Peanut) just for Aurrie to come back again, but she thought the navy was gonna work out for her and it didn't, so she came back. So yeah, I was pissed about that, but what can be done about it? It didn't work out for her, whether it was her fault with her temper and whatever or not, so we are just gonna have to accept it. She's back and she's working her way back into the roleplays and thats how its gonna be. There's nothing we can do to change whats happened, so we're just gonna have to let it happen.

Aurrie, I apologize if it seemed like I was fighting your battle here, cos I wasn't trying to, but I think that some of the things said (not all of them, cos I agree with Chesy in some places) were unfair. You'll do all this a hell of a lot better than me, but I'm a loyal person and am very easily pissed, so I saw this and couldn't keep my mouth shut. Sorry, love ya.

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[fernie. (:]

Hm, when Spice does something, she sure doesn't just do it halfway, that's for sure... something I've learned over these what, 5 years? Haha, anyway.

Seeing as this is a board for opinions and criticism etc, I just have one thing to say. Cheshy, if you're so sour about Aurrie going for two high positions, maybe that should motivate you to make yours that bit more outstanding? I don't know, it just sounds as though you're a little jealous to me.

I can't say anything about post length or activeness right now though, seeing as that would be totally hypocritical xD. So, uhm, I guess that's it.
Apart from one last thing. Private stuff [boyfriend, navy] is just that. Private. So you shouldn't be slating something you don't really know anything about, because it's not really your place. If Aurrie wants to bring that into this, it's her say so, and not for anyone to say about until then.

Kay, I'm done. (:

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[cheshy says grace]

About the Shard and Shade thing, to be honest, I was pissed off about that too. But when I saw Shard didn't get the part, I was ok, and about the Shade thing, I didn't really notice. Since I don't have very many cats in MoonClan, but now that I think about it, it is unfair. And that was just what Brindle and I were talking about, just listing it in there for her. 'Cos she wanted to know.

But it's not just her gathering posts. It's all of her other ones too. They've been awfully short and lacking muse and I can never seem to find anything to reply with, so how can you?

And I know that Kuri wouldn't do that, but just auditioning - it doesn't make any sense. Out of all of us I would think that Aurrie would be the one who got sick of a bunch of high positions. And she had just come back from killing off her leader and medicine cat - she could at least give us others a chance.

And no, Raveneh didn't hold auditions. Somehow, Aurrie got chosen with Swampfox - whom I just adore - but still.

Yes, I know I'm harsh, and Aurrie's harsh too, so she should understand. I'm not soft or a good little compassionate girl. She wanted to know the s.hit we were talking about behind her back and here I am, saying the s.hit to her face. So there's the truth.



Ferniee; I wasn't asking for her private stuff. I was just telling her to not use it as an excuse. And I am not jealous, you could just say my fur was rubbed the wrong way by this. I don't do outstanding, I just do my best.


EDIT. I just realized you can't take me seriously with that avatar |D

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[&&R.A.V.E.N :3]

/coughs;
Just putting this out there....
I didn't have to hold auditions.
I found a good cat, and I new Aurrie was a good roleplayer
I could care less about if she just came back and all that jazz.

[(aurora) of the problematique]

Alright alright... I've got my replies for all of this so don't post while I type, okay. Otherwise, it'll just be confusing ^^; *goes to edits this post now*

Why the f**k should I care if I have your respect or not? This is the goddamn internet. I graduated High School. I'm done with this bullshit drama of people talking behind my back. Seriously, I don't really care. I find this hilarious actually.

I'm gonna copypasta what I sent to Chesh on Myspace.

HAHAHA I'm not stressing. Hell, I'm finding this hilarious actually.

Heh.

My roleplaying varies, as it always has. I'm not God. I don't have epic RPing skills but I'm certainly no n00b. If I'm having a crappy day, I'm having a crappy day.

I got a deputy position because Raven asked me to be her deputy to help out in CloudClan so you're pissed off because you didn't win? Helloooo? You lost EclipseClan and MoonClan and BrightClan auditions. It's not my fault you lost.

If you didn't notice, I went for EC medicine cat apprentice. Holy s**t, I LOST? WOULD YOU BELIEVE IT? And guess what? I don't really care!!! LOLOLOL I auditioned for SC mca because it's fun. And if I don't win, I'm gonna audition for the next meddie position that goes around.

Stop the goddamn fussin'. You might end up winning a deputy position soon cause Kee and Rogue have kinda dropped in activity.

Alright, about the auditions. I agree with Spice. What about when Shade and Shard auditioned. Stop getting bitchy about not winning and use that as incentive to work harder. I'm not going to post what's been happening in my private life (not my boyfriend or Navy stuff) but if you really want, you can look on my Myspace Blog since you're on my myspace, Chesh. My roleplaying is garbage when I feel like garbage but it's not always like that. I'm not the RPing God. Go to Cimoron Island if you want their 6000+ word posts, kthxbai.

You and Brindle wanna cohort about anything else, then you can f**k**g talk to me instead going around my back like two boys comparing dicks while their mother isn't watching.

[Spice..xx]

EDIT: Deleted post as not needed.

Aurrie I would like to say......I find you incredibly amusing *pisses self laughing*

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[(aurora) of the problematique]

_{For the love of bloody Christ, if you want my RPing to be longer, just freaking tell me >___________>. I'm not going to be an ass about it unless you are. Just be like "Hey, can you add a bit to your post. I can't really think of anything to say"}

[Spice..xx]

_{*raises hands in self defense* I never said nothin' bout your r'ping. I post crrrrap when I'm in that kinda mood so if your posts are shorter then WHATEVER, I've worked with far effin less than what you give me dearest. I don't think your any worse or any better than you have been, so yeah, whatever.}